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Sunday, November 28, 2010

Childhood Moments





Posted by Dasuntoucha at 8:39 PM
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19 comments:

  1. Wonderful! A poem about stars that has some science-fiction-y tones to it (the part about humanity's hypothesized ancestors from distant space reminds me of Stargate SG-1, one of my favorite shows.)
    I especially love the background picture; it's gorgeous.

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  2. Dear Dasuntoucha
    Wonderfully painted the picture.. and the image you have created is vivid.. Liked it so much...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  3. What an amazing childhood imagination you had!
    LOL

    Getting lost in this poem makes you forget the ways of adult society....if only for a moment.
    Brilliant.

    x

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  4. bittersweet,
    love the image accompanying your words.
    well done.
    Thanks for sharing it with potluck poetry.
    Happy Monday.

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  5. Beautiful poem. Really like it :-)

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  7. Dasuntoucha,
    So much truth in this piece.
    Pamela

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  8. That type face was really hard to read, and having no punctuation doesn't help, either... I'd
    like to be able to read your words easily - then I think I might enjioy them!

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  9. I really like that. The background was cool. When you're young you're totally innocent to the world, I agree. It's tough, but I guess we all have to figure out what's really going on at some point. I used to love staring at the stars! I'm glad you're back!

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  10. wonderfully written, let the young rule the world! muhaha~

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  11. Glad to see this at Sunday Scribbling.
    well done poem.

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  12. For the duration of that poem I was transported to your childhood moments and felt myself at tranquility and ease. Beautiful.

    ♥

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  13. like this and the dipping of past and future...childhood moments can take us to so many places and hold us in a balance we sometimes can not find from day to day living....blessings...bkm

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  14. @ Abigail…thanks…I’m definitely one of those babies that was raised on sci-fi :-)

    @ Shashi…thanks for stopping by

    @ R. Paris…yeah I had a really active imagination fueled by comic books and Japanese Manga (^_^)

    @ Jingle…thank you for all that you do…blessings

    @ FM…thank you

    @ Gautami…appreciate you dropping by

    @ Pamela…always value your words

    @ Jinksy…sorry about the font choice…that’s how I saw the words in my head…thank you for stopping by (^_^)

    @ C2N…Word ;-)

    @ Riika…yes indeed!

    @ Raiya…hey you!!! How have you been!!? It’s been a while since I’ve seen you…I’ma have to stop by you blog and see what’s been going on :-)

    @ bkm…absolutely…thank you for dropping by

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  15. you really took me into your fantasy..across galaxies and into your very dreams...loved this one

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  16. woah!!!

    my eyes nearly popped out reading this.. it was hard to read with this theme.. :(

    anyway abt the poem..

    yes childhood moments are lovely to cherish and re live as well :)

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  17. This is really beautiful. Quite befitting as my first read after my new post. Thank you for sharing these thoughts, lovely!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  18. Potluck week 12 awards/treats, Enjoy

    Thank you a ton for the lovely contribution!
    Happy Friday!
    See you next time!

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  19. A very beautiful and cute poem... :)

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