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Thursday, June 23, 2011

Floral Arrangement




23 comments:

  1. Brilliantly shared... love the form, the mosaic garden painted by your words.

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  2. You have woven the images perfectly!

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  3. That was so Beautifully written. The first line sucked me in, and took me on a poetic journey. Very nice bro!

    MIKS

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  4. Your poetry is always so thoughtful and wise. My favorite line is " funny how hibiscus desires for a life amongst carnation fields.." it's a beautiful poem and the imagery of violence and beauty is breathtaking!

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  5. the last verse blew me away.
    You are words are inspiring.xo

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  6. phew
    like a blow to the head
    awesome

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  7. Your words are always beautifully written but what the reader feels in your pieces is what separates your poetry from being merely beautiful and takes them to simply captivating :)

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  8. refreshingly refresh! flowers become precious when they have meaning.. :)

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  9. love your use of plants and flowers and trees to express what you mean here. loved it!

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  10. I enjoyed your verse! And thanks very much for your fun contribution to this week's Limerick-Off! I hope you'll be a regular contributor! :)

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  11. So glad you visited my blog.. thanks...I was brought up amidst "concrete weeds"..and weeds win, showing up in the cracks! Perceptive writing..well done!!

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  12. Wow, so many contrasts. Just brilliant.

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  13. wow.
    tangled and stretched words.
    well penned.
    Happy Potluck.

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  14. Love your use of flower imagery, especially "daisies in / a dandelion age"

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  15. Loved the imagery and the growing flower.

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  16. Really like the way you put your site together, a really imaginative and creative layout and style. Enjoyed this piece a lot, just flowed, your words, project the reader line to line and love the consistency you kept throughout the poem. really nice work, thanks for sharing:)

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  17. This is beautiful and really really awesome!

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  18. you are such a powerful writer. wow

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  19. I just re-read this. I liked it even more the second time.

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  20. Here we sit ripping petals one by one. They are not important, just slivers of colour that were bound to turn brown anyway.

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