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Sunday, June 5, 2011

Scripted Sycophant





One Shot Wednesday

11 comments:

  1. *SIGH*............i miss reading POETRY!!!!....you have never, ever ceased to amaze me....so much food for thought...especially in those last stanzas....you already know how much i love your mind...blessings

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  2. "Don't let the wrath of fear murder you in cold blood"

    It's funny how many of us take fear for granted without realizing that we live in it everyday. I'll admit that I've allowed fear to hinder me from pursuing my dreams/passion but after a decade of being overcomed by it, I made the decision to challenge it. Instead of letting it conquer me, I will conquer it. It's time to LIVE!

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  3. dude, feel like its been forever since i was over here...so when are you going to record these...this rocks spoken word...flee the adult become..yeah...harlots masquerading as muse...nice...one i wish i had written...

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  4. Great work. This would rock spoken word. Great deal of truth, especially in reconciling with former beliefs and loss... this is a tight write and flows with emotional emphasis.

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  5. A very powerful piece!
    Very well expressed.. indeed, at times it seems one is simply obsessed..

    Intense image and a wonderful composition.. kudos!
    Hugs xoxox

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  6. Fabulous imagery. Deep and highly charged with emotion in every word and line.
    Thank you for visiting my blog and the commment.

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  7. hey that's brilliant writing ... amazing imagery.

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  8. It seems like you're having a bad day, but meanwhile it inspired amazing poetry. "I'm destined to captain emptiness sailing the waters of a discarded sea." Really moving. I think I might be having the same day. Hang in there....your poetry is beautiful!

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  9. very strong opening lines...took me right into the scene and i know what you're talking about...powerful!!

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  10. Amazing work! So many lines I loved in this. The last two are killers. Very raw, intense. I agree that this would be great read out loud.

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