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Sunday, August 21, 2011

Incoherency


10 comments:

  1. wow
    as cool as ice
    as good as as frost
    hmm

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  2. Wow, that was very powerful and emotionally interesting. I liked it.

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  3. Very true, adulation does try and drown out such fantasy, very gripping piece!

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  4. smiles. yeah i like to dock at 5 as well...oh to have an empty boat without the baggage but...nice write man...

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  5. A wonderful thought-provoking rite. Nicely done!

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  6. It's an excellent response to a messed up world, indeed. May the natural world overwhelm us with its magic. Lovely poem.

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  7. Ha! Love the finish...we all should should know that whispering through the grass, feel that movement...if more of us did so...this world might not be so bad after all!

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  8. like your stance and enjoyed your style too- so much to like here - love your blog - ill be back for more

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  9. Beautiful and truthful as always! Sorry I've been gone for so long. I've missed reading your wonderfully poignant and touching prose. Hopefully there will be more soon!

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