tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post1920264154159188276..comments2023-10-23T07:14:05.716-07:00Comments on Modernity's Muse: It Feels Like...Dasuntouchahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07702658573117359403noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-3416281293476082972010-10-26T09:22:19.100-07:002010-10-26T09:22:19.100-07:00creative, filled with lovely imagery and more! I s...creative, filled with lovely imagery and more! I second BKM, would love to hear it read! :D<br /><br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/10/25/insatiable/" rel="nofollow">My Potluck Is Here</a>.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-638056740927093582010-10-25T19:12:51.653-07:002010-10-25T19:12:51.653-07:00This is a simply wonderful poem with undertones of...This is a simply wonderful poem with undertones of peace and a sense of eternity. Nice work. Fine contribution to potluck. Thank you.JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-88497597176723949802010-10-25T18:11:54.738-07:002010-10-25T18:11:54.738-07:00Very creative. Enjoyed it.Very creative. Enjoyed it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-26218499225648775152010-10-25T12:07:09.433-07:002010-10-25T12:07:09.433-07:00beautiful - would love to hear it read - that feel...beautiful - would love to hear it read - that feeling - you described it so very well...lovely...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-91324652629595568092010-10-25T10:38:39.599-07:002010-10-25T10:38:39.599-07:00Absolutely exquisite poem!
http://liv2write2day.w...Absolutely exquisite poem!<br /><br />http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/10/08/room-for-romance-old-love/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-10056353388208097962010-10-25T08:20:17.341-07:002010-10-25T08:20:17.341-07:00I'll bet you could have kept going with the &q...I'll bet you could have kept going with the "It feels like..." stanzas - it seemed you had plenty to say, maybe more than you did. Nice piece.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-54806544666650336052010-10-25T06:16:39.593-07:002010-10-25T06:16:39.593-07:00wow! love your words..wow! love your words..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-70325128914102873192010-10-25T00:59:30.879-07:002010-10-25T00:59:30.879-07:00Love the imagery that flow within the poem =D grea...Love the imagery that flow within the poem =D great to be here!^^~RiikaInfinityyhttp://riikainfinityy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-38698530189764356712010-10-24T20:44:41.071-07:002010-10-24T20:44:41.071-07:00Pillow stained monsoon...Nice!Pillow stained monsoon...Nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-65469794310440777832010-10-24T20:39:10.636-07:002010-10-24T20:39:10.636-07:00Oh! this is such a beautiful poem. I love the voca...Oh! this is such a beautiful poem. I love the vocab, wording and imagery. It all melds together so nicely. well done, Bravo!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-52311278630743056202010-10-07T14:25:58.544-07:002010-10-07T14:25:58.544-07:00straight dope bruh!straight dope bruh!chellenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-38953378690426215702010-10-01T19:34:31.124-07:002010-10-01T19:34:31.124-07:00The undulating rhythm keeps the reader entranced.
...The undulating rhythm keeps the reader entranced.<br /> <br />It really is a thing to feel so entwined.Melhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04195427563663623591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-13584922482770939192010-09-29T20:16:44.577-07:002010-09-29T20:16:44.577-07:00Thanks for the beautiful participation at poetry p...Thanks for the beautiful participation at poetry potluck, Happy Wednesday!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-76520527554766858002010-09-29T17:25:34.847-07:002010-09-29T17:25:34.847-07:00beautiful imagery... love the "cheeks/ etched...beautiful imagery... love the "cheeks/ etched with traces/ of a pillow stained/ monsoon..."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-45845945601435179622010-09-28T13:55:09.111-07:002010-09-28T13:55:09.111-07:00"Where wishes piggyback
On the wings of a pr..."Where wishes piggyback <br />On the wings of a prayer"<br /><br />One of the most beautiful lines I've every read in my life. Literally. <br />BreathtakingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-59698826068203849572010-09-27T16:17:49.037-07:002010-09-27T16:17:49.037-07:00My favorite line was "where wishes piggyback ...My favorite line was "where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer"Anahttp://theperfectionproject.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-30972336411577587192010-09-27T13:19:55.667-07:002010-09-27T13:19:55.667-07:00Nice extended blood metaphor.Nice extended blood metaphor.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-37818830423930471042010-09-27T06:31:08.905-07:002010-09-27T06:31:08.905-07:00Truly beautifully written! :-)Truly beautifully written! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-74040103553355287792010-09-26T22:53:19.289-07:002010-09-26T22:53:19.289-07:00Wow, wonderfully written and I love the way you se...Wow, wonderfully written and I love the way you set out your poem, just wonderful!!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-22661216102168130722010-09-26T18:24:54.021-07:002010-09-26T18:24:54.021-07:00What a diplomatic and serene poem! A joy to read!...What a diplomatic and serene poem! A joy to read!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-12052985642605444582010-09-26T18:03:30.832-07:002010-09-26T18:03:30.832-07:00Lovely I would love to levitate to that place wher...Lovely I would love to levitate to that place where wishes piggyback on the wings of prayer...wow!Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-1454748709520772972010-09-26T17:46:40.225-07:002010-09-26T17:46:40.225-07:00You have a unique way with words. Very creative!You have a unique way with words. Very creative!Carinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976869000808518440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-48225840165985574492010-09-26T17:21:11.240-07:002010-09-26T17:21:11.240-07:00This poem gives me a feeling of peacefulness!This poem gives me a feeling of peacefulness!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-38291129168141819352010-09-26T17:13:08.883-07:002010-09-26T17:13:08.883-07:00it feels like morning breeze,
love your word play...it feels like morning breeze,<br /><br />love your word play and the images your words evoke.<br />stunning poem!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-75781746699737824322010-09-26T16:59:44.094-07:002010-09-26T16:59:44.094-07:00Wonderfully written, love your words!=PWonderfully written, love your words!=PRiikaInfinityyhttp://riikainfinityy.comnoreply@blogger.com