tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post2415113074683581008..comments2023-10-23T07:14:05.716-07:00Comments on Modernity's Muse: CavalcadeDasuntouchahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07702658573117359403noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-76462150619967245852010-12-05T03:42:55.718-08:002010-12-05T03:42:55.718-08:00Powerful, so powerful I hurt inside...
I have a th...Powerful, so powerful I hurt inside...<br />I have a thing about mirrors always have... something evil somewhere lurks!! (imagination maybe!!) xPenxLady Penelopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17720133719887921036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-49918696273549260602010-11-07T07:56:59.611-08:002010-11-07T07:56:59.611-08:00What a powerful poem and what a true one. Striking...What a powerful poem and what a true one. Striking visually.<br /><br />I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you.<br /><br />Hope you had fun with Potluck.JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-81223470989106677262010-11-06T23:09:24.658-07:002010-11-06T23:09:24.658-07:00THIS IS SO APPEALING! METAPHOR IN SUPERB USAGE. WO...THIS IS SO APPEALING! METAPHOR IN SUPERB USAGE. WOAH,I GIVE IT ALL.MICHAELhttp://ogungbesan20.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-58254879012956629252010-11-06T16:50:28.399-07:002010-11-06T16:50:28.399-07:00http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/06/monda...http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/06/mondays-child-the-smell-of-life/<br /><br />will give you the perfect poet award on week 33,<br />I nominated you.<br />cheers.<br />xxxLinda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-26058890218428819712010-11-04T17:39:31.643-07:002010-11-04T17:39:31.643-07:00http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thurs...http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-november-4-10/<br /><br />how r u?<br />Letting you know Poets Rally week 32 is on,<br />Drop me your entry if you wish to be part of it.<br />Thanks a lot,<br />Happy November!<br />xxxJinglehttp://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-80255394365927705802010-11-03T16:54:21.972-07:002010-11-03T16:54:21.972-07:00oh so very beautiful. You always blow me away.oh so very beautiful. You always blow me away.Abigail Pearl Popehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07029942941458213206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-83839645460220289582010-11-03T11:26:03.990-07:002010-11-03T11:26:03.990-07:00OMG...
This was scary and spooky.......grooooooooo...OMG...<br />This was scary and spooky.......grooooooooooowl.. I do that to keep up my courage and not really scare anyone.. haha<br /><br />Very well composed.. I like how you have made it run on trickling......<br /><br />Poof!! I go to the next entry now..<br />Wnat to know more..? Here- https://oliviasbiopiclog.wordpress.com/2010/10/26/trick-or-treat/Oliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-43670807447093720202010-11-03T08:23:48.214-07:002010-11-03T08:23:48.214-07:00Very powerful words, laden with a fear for the fut...Very powerful words, laden with a fear for the future, as the ending suggests!<br /><br />Excellent poetry prompt.<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-41453428482698708112010-11-03T07:31:07.324-07:002010-11-03T07:31:07.324-07:00Ah...I do believe this is my favorite poem out of ...Ah...I do believe this is my favorite poem out of all the wonderful poetry you create!<br /><br />I'm almost jealous...<br /><br />; )Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-89155783896115101442010-11-03T07:27:10.609-07:002010-11-03T07:27:10.609-07:00Please help giving (belated) birthday wishes to 3 ...Please help giving (belated) birthday wishes to 3 or 4 fellow poets:<br /><br />http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/happy-birthday-eric-dom/<br /><br />Thanks a lot for the support.<br />Happy November!<br />Your presence adds light to our space, keep shining!<br />xxxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-69745975475808395662010-11-02T20:17:25.464-07:002010-11-02T20:17:25.464-07:00Well Done, love the idea of the circus, performing...Well Done, love the idea of the circus, performing and fear~ Brilliantly interwoven!!!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-13323908634822816312010-11-02T13:32:56.102-07:002010-11-02T13:32:56.102-07:00A wonderfully eerie poem, crafted to strike fear i...A wonderfully eerie poem, crafted to strike fear into the heart...well done!Lynette Killamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13747902602019771481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-83401874511905456612010-11-02T03:56:51.639-07:002010-11-02T03:56:51.639-07:00Abstract emotions take concrete shape in your vers...Abstract emotions take concrete shape in your verse. Superb.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-74698256478741037742010-11-01T18:00:27.772-07:002010-11-01T18:00:27.772-07:00imagery is amazing, deep, well done.imagery is amazing, deep, well done.SuziCatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04025931724313344438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-72144233740655330622010-11-01T16:00:15.528-07:002010-11-01T16:00:15.528-07:00Very cool. I love how you work in the circus theme...Very cool. I love how you work in the circus theme. It makes the message all that more powerful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-72951228952532257762010-11-01T11:57:36.220-07:002010-11-01T11:57:36.220-07:00This is a powerful, creative poem. I enjoy your pr...This is a powerful, creative poem. I enjoy your presentation as well as your words.<br />Victoria<br />http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/jingles-poetry-potluck-all-hallows-eve/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-77847947813918023632010-11-01T11:49:22.665-07:002010-11-01T11:49:22.665-07:00short sharp shock .... nice nice nice
cheers!!!
h...short sharp shock .... nice nice nice<br />cheers!!!<br /><br />here is mine for pot luck its a softie compared to urs :)<br />http://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/tricky-treat/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-42536884950472097232010-11-01T10:17:20.886-07:002010-11-01T10:17:20.886-07:00Nice Potluck entry/Nice Potluck entry/Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-43137186266709962062010-11-01T08:41:57.798-07:002010-11-01T08:41:57.798-07:00Life is a freak show/circus/ brilliant my friend, ...Life is a freak show/circus/ brilliant my friend, brilliant!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-72474614889292427062010-11-01T08:38:21.796-07:002010-11-01T08:38:21.796-07:00Love the layout and the ending - my type of poem!!...Love the layout and the ending - my type of poem!!<br /><br />http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/halloween-fright/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-91316055331539963522010-11-01T08:03:55.993-07:002010-11-01T08:03:55.993-07:00Great word usage and flow!Great word usage and flow!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-85764861399362612662010-11-01T08:03:37.866-07:002010-11-01T08:03:37.866-07:00wow!wow!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-56298583918869950612010-11-01T07:14:56.440-07:002010-11-01T07:14:56.440-07:00this is an fantabulous piece...it's very dark ...this is an fantabulous piece...it's very dark and appropriate for halloween...that last line is a killer...thanks for sharing!<br /><br />http://peachpitproduction.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/hallows-eve/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-73767586366739836092010-11-01T07:02:14.120-07:002010-11-01T07:02:14.120-07:00very powerful and creepy,
tiptoe work on a wire,...very powerful and creepy,<br /><br /><br />tiptoe work on a wire,<br />wow, that is breath taking line....<br /><br />thanks for sharing,<br />Happy Belated Halloween,<br />Happy November.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-12414046874491350972010-11-01T06:58:53.411-07:002010-11-01T06:58:53.411-07:00What a strong poem! I had to rush through this, br...What a strong poem! I had to rush through this, breathless!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.com