tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post3347383573418282480..comments2023-10-23T07:14:05.716-07:00Comments on Modernity's Muse: Pathological IntermentDasuntouchahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07702658573117359403noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-16469516030269005912010-12-22T20:37:22.382-08:002010-12-22T20:37:22.382-08:00...the convenience
of a disguised truth...
-and ......the convenience <br />of a disguised truth...<br /><br />-and that-<br /><br />...unheralded<br />quartet<br />which echoes thru the halls<br />of a Sistine dimension... <br /><br />your imagery fans smoldering embers<br />taking me places<br />i might not have chosen to go<br /><br />muse, indeed<br /><br />...<br /><br />http://seizingserenity.blogspot.com/2010/12/honeysuckle-hyperbole.htmlJourney by Firehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10513868940598453102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-80307563626552556442010-12-14T11:50:21.063-08:002010-12-14T11:50:21.063-08:00Amazing imagery.Amazing imagery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-25499370620206790832010-12-12T06:14:43.516-08:002010-12-12T06:14:43.516-08:00Beautiful. This touched me deeply.Beautiful. This touched me deeply.Olivia Greyhttp://omgrey.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-313021596581070052010-12-09T07:59:17.006-08:002010-12-09T07:59:17.006-08:00http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010...http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/12/08/thursday-poets-rally-week-34-participation-awards/<br /><br />awards for rally week 34 posted, enjoy!<br />Happy Thursday!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-47366688603264554712010-12-07T06:00:32.417-08:002010-12-07T06:00:32.417-08:00Powerful depths in your imagery here, amazing meta...Powerful depths in your imagery here, amazing metaphor. Wonderful write.<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by mine and following along.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-3386205382086694742010-12-05T03:30:46.898-08:002010-12-05T03:30:46.898-08:00pain, and it's bedfellow, suffering... wonderf...pain, and it's bedfellow, suffering... wonderful poem, that draws you in and doesn't let you go 'til the end. Then you can draw a breath!!<br />thank you for dropping by, and the 'white stuff' is still laying, although I hope today will bring a thawing, 'tis lovely at first, but does linger too, too,long!! lol!!<br />xPenxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-6596026582880790362010-12-04T21:24:33.419-08:002010-12-04T21:24:33.419-08:00love the way u started it and the way u ended it.....love the way u started it and the way u ended it..<br /><br />different and to the point poem :)Harshikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11748308710530723335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-56912662947327094872010-12-04T16:02:41.693-08:002010-12-04T16:02:41.693-08:00Wow, this blew me away! The word play was amazing...Wow, this blew me away! The word play was amazing.<br /><br />http://chickunderconstruction.wordpress.com/2010/11/21/sunday-morning/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-35961764389265750392010-12-04T13:28:17.325-08:002010-12-04T13:28:17.325-08:00You made beautiful art with your clever words!
All...You made beautiful art with your clever words!<br />All the best<br />Marinela xShort poemshttp://www.marinelareka.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-86421774882678999352010-12-04T12:45:56.065-08:002010-12-04T12:45:56.065-08:00It's so sad and beautiful at the same time. Y...It's so sad and beautiful at the same time. Your poetry is art. It's gorgeous and thought provoking.Climb2Nowherehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01401286435338987951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-3320498594364854042010-12-04T12:44:02.352-08:002010-12-04T12:44:02.352-08:00Beautiful expression and depth.
Anita.Beautiful expression and depth.<br /><br />Anita.Anita Magdalenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759774477028333590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-77591049356823668752010-12-04T11:38:52.198-08:002010-12-04T11:38:52.198-08:00It sang itself :) greatIt sang itself :) greatAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-40003882165087036382010-12-04T08:27:40.843-08:002010-12-04T08:27:40.843-08:00I think the first part itself takes one to differe...I think the first part itself takes one to different levels! :) I think the first comment here says it all. Your poem is definitely an Art.!<br /><br />Here is my <a href="http://wp.me/p11nRA-GF" rel="nofollow">Rally Poem</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-12036616133203645842010-12-04T04:43:35.122-08:002010-12-04T04:43:35.122-08:00Great creation.
Loved reading it.Great creation.<br />Loved reading it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-90001112705154899172010-12-03T20:57:42.358-08:002010-12-03T20:57:42.358-08:00Beautiful words...
I love the way you started the ...Beautiful words...<br />I love the way you started the poem...<br />I loved reading it :)eyeographyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05508519847517495863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-79077607653469534622010-12-03T20:52:47.993-08:002010-12-03T20:52:47.993-08:00This is simply an astounding poem..it grabbed me f...This is simply an astounding poem..it grabbed me from the first word and carried me along on its passionate journey! So many wonderful images and emotions worked into those carefully-chosen words...I loved it!Lynette Killamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13747902602019771481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-4579099154033867202010-12-03T17:16:06.904-08:002010-12-03T17:16:06.904-08:00One word...Wow!One word...Wow!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-91013650771539452012010-12-03T16:16:14.853-08:002010-12-03T16:16:14.853-08:00Wow, what an awesome poem. Really loved this part:...Wow, what an awesome poem. Really loved this part:<br /><br />"Pity…<br /><br />…that sorrow bathes<br />in the comfort<br />of barren days"<br /><br />You are very talented!Just Mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06182345687430630873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-36743965764939545202010-12-03T14:37:07.543-08:002010-12-03T14:37:07.543-08:00This is pretty incredible and I'm quite jealou...This is pretty incredible and I'm quite jealous of the line "soothes like a genocide". Genius.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-84690252337647601912010-12-03T11:46:08.426-08:002010-12-03T11:46:08.426-08:00Very creative, enjoyed the words!Very creative, enjoyed the words!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-49513517065388441422010-12-03T10:19:30.284-08:002010-12-03T10:19:30.284-08:00wonderful imagery.. just awesome.. :)wonderful imagery.. just awesome.. :)Sayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-21223052992879841412010-12-03T10:18:44.827-08:002010-12-03T10:18:44.827-08:00Marvelous.. simply awesome.. artistic at its best....Marvelous.. simply awesome.. artistic at its best...wonderfully woven thoughts..<br />amazing<br /><br />Regards~ SayandeepSayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-26650101647285332342010-12-03T07:12:35.061-08:002010-12-03T07:12:35.061-08:00super fine tuned piece.
your creativity is infinit...super fine tuned piece.<br />your creativity is infinite.<br />well penned.<br /><br />the metaphor is breathe taking!<br />Thanks for sharing such a divine piece with poets rally.<br />Cheers.<br />have fun!Jinglehttp://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-53961424949286162472010-12-03T06:58:21.207-08:002010-12-03T06:58:21.207-08:00Your words are art.Your words are art.Some kind of courage.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09784172634423346269noreply@blogger.com