tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post4127536479556954878..comments2023-10-23T07:14:05.716-07:00Comments on Modernity's Muse: Upon A Colibri Moon...Dasuntouchahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07702658573117359403noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-4191789656973641942011-06-16T19:59:04.424-07:002011-06-16T19:59:04.424-07:00That was fantastic. I read it from left to right g...That was fantastic. I read it from left to right going down, but am going to go back & re-read. I suspect you could also read each side individually. <br /><br />Yes, and again fabulous! As others have said, this is a fabulous collaboration & a delight to read. One of my favourite entries for One Stop this week. Thanks for visiting me, so I could enjoy such a wonderful piece.Katherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-34149548306550577962011-06-16T19:34:23.949-07:002011-06-16T19:34:23.949-07:00Lost my comment some how. Anyway, great conversat...Lost my comment some how. Anyway, great conversation. Extremely unique and creative.Henry Clemmonshttp://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/love-in-scent-reprise.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-1191794832192761702011-06-16T17:38:21.490-07:002011-06-16T17:38:21.490-07:00What a great idea and so well done! The two poems ...What a great idea and so well done! The two poems were like a dance. Each beautiful on its own but even more beautiful together.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-73807985504812174242011-06-16T14:56:56.491-07:002011-06-16T14:56:56.491-07:00so cool - they could both stand alone and yet floa...so cool - they could both stand alone and yet float seamlessly into one another...great collab...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-55382141023051864042011-06-16T08:55:16.754-07:002011-06-16T08:55:16.754-07:00dude...stellar form....love the call and repeat be...dude...stellar form....love the call and repeat between the two of you...each could stand alone but together make so much more...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-56998589654834813112011-06-16T07:15:40.728-07:002011-06-16T07:15:40.728-07:00I love the combined line "Called uncertainty ...I love the combined line "Called uncertainty as truth". Such a creative effort, look forward to more. The script you use really enhances the poem with a very personal touch.Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-34626230867859087212011-06-16T04:29:33.039-07:002011-06-16T04:29:33.039-07:00Amazing! I LOVE this!Amazing! I LOVE this!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-77405935349732139772011-06-15T06:09:49.111-07:002011-06-15T06:09:49.111-07:00What a cool collaborative format! You compliment ...What a cool collaborative format! You compliment each other beautifully.Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-59040124292021540282011-06-14T08:06:13.697-07:002011-06-14T08:06:13.697-07:00Love the way the two poems mirror each other. Such...Love the way the two poems mirror each other. Such a powerful collaboration of poets' hearts.Judith C Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09900422363643962837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-16116042197274849262011-06-14T07:08:50.832-07:002011-06-14T07:08:50.832-07:00I just read each side 5 times. This is amazing!!!...I just read each side 5 times. This is amazing!!!!! I love when artists work together because just like everything else in life with the right partner magic happens. That was so beautiful! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!Climb2Nowherehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01401286435338987951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-60940553785877309852011-06-14T06:21:07.080-07:002011-06-14T06:21:07.080-07:00I love the creativity in this project for both of ...I love the creativity in this project for both of you. Thank you for sharing them. They're deep. Thank you for visiting and commenting on my post too.Olive Treehttp://peaceroad.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-64559173301529172952011-06-14T06:01:21.063-07:002011-06-14T06:01:21.063-07:00This is incredible so many breath-taking phrases!This is incredible so many breath-taking phrases!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-91457057075135608402011-06-14T02:13:03.979-07:002011-06-14T02:13:03.979-07:00wowww! fantastic thoughts and idea! so creative, l...wowww! fantastic thoughts and idea! so creative, love it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-71259032623914898402011-06-13T22:55:37.745-07:002011-06-13T22:55:37.745-07:00What an aahhmaaazzing collaboration!! Such a uniqu...What an aahhmaaazzing collaboration!! Such a unique poem this is!! Really lovely!! It was like reading 3 different poems in one - the red alone, the black alone, and red-with-black in conjunct! TOOO GOOD!! <br /><br />Kudos to the both of you on such a fabulous duet!!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-56141171645748038942011-06-13T07:38:54.584-07:002011-06-13T07:38:54.584-07:00Nice - such an original piece. Great idea and we...Nice - such an original piece. Great idea and well executed.Poets Unitedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14470198264008339228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-35344315033103446252011-06-13T05:35:19.191-07:002011-06-13T05:35:19.191-07:00This is so creative.
Glad to see you in.
keep your...This is so creative.<br />Glad to see you in.<br />keep your creativity coming.Jinglehttp://www.thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-78737419622840590102011-06-12T22:45:52.505-07:002011-06-12T22:45:52.505-07:00WoW!!!! This is beautiful, passionate, and sublime...WoW!!!! This is beautiful, passionate, and sublime!!! Thank you to both of you.Kunlinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03536634352133872387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774251569661874793.post-30809964881184159322011-06-12T22:05:16.338-07:002011-06-12T22:05:16.338-07:00a fabulous collaboration... much depth, tenderness...a fabulous collaboration... much depth, tenderness yet power bursting from the lines.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.com