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Saturday, April 24, 2010

Proportion Control



Posted by Dasuntoucha at 10:33 PM
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11 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 11, 2010 at 11:24 PM

    I must admit I'm guilty.
    Ugh.
    Now that I feel on blast I think i'll
    reevaluate

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  2. WeaselAugust 15, 2010 at 3:26 PM

    Wonderfully crafted poem! Great post!

    -Weasel

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  3. Diane TAugust 15, 2010 at 4:54 PM

    Impressive! I actually thought it was a food label until I read it! Brilliant poem!

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  4. MaryAugust 15, 2010 at 5:28 PM

    Down with presrvatives. Down with high fructose corn syrup. Health is most important.

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  5. brenda wAugust 15, 2010 at 5:28 PM

    This is phenomenal! I love it! Bravo! Wow, look at all the exclamation points! ha! Really, this is creative. Well done.
    ~Brenda

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallAugust 15, 2010 at 5:38 PM

    very inventive thinking....
    beautiful art.

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  7. Just MeAugust 15, 2010 at 6:24 PM

    This is amazing! I love how you did this, very creative. Health is so important and being a woman we get so many mixed messages about how we should look. I really enjoyed this poem. Great work.

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  8. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 15, 2010 at 6:42 PM

    Oh my goodness, this is just WONDERFULLY creative and fun.........awesome! Inspiring!

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  9. signed...bkmAugust 15, 2010 at 9:02 PM

    Wonderful, I love how you did this piece...I am always questioning what I eat...an avid label reader...clever and fun...bkm

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  10. MoryAugust 16, 2010 at 10:07 AM

    very nice indeed.

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  11. AnonymousAugust 18, 2010 at 11:01 PM

    Oh, brilliant approach..wonderful poem! Most of us can identify with trying to live up to an ideal, and falling short. Your poem points this out succintly, and with humour. I thouroughly enjoyed it...

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