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Sunday, November 7, 2010

Comparchmental


Posted by Dasuntoucha at 8:07 PM
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17 comments:

  1. SharNovember 7, 2010 at 8:19 PM

    beautiful, bravo, encore!!! I just love your style. "Poesia" how pretty the sound.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 7, 2010 at 9:20 PM

    Sift through sunlit rubble
    For signs of a life
    He knows will never be

    * beautiful sad song
    Divine...

    Shegrooves

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  3. Philip ThriftNovember 7, 2010 at 11:24 PM

    Sad story about this 'hapless slave'. Beautifully composed.

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  4. KunlineNovember 8, 2010 at 10:03 AM

    WOW.Poesia is so good...It is powerful and intense! I love this one. Thank you!:)

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  5. Abigail Pearl PopeNovember 8, 2010 at 12:12 PM

    wow... just wow. I wish I had an intelligent comment, but all I can do is bask in the words here, speechless.

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  6. Climb2NowhereNovember 8, 2010 at 3:01 PM

    I was missing my beautiful poetry fix all week! Thanks for never disappointing. I love that phrase "inhales the truth." Your poetry is so beautiful and always makes me think. This one is just gorgeous!

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  7. DasuntouchaNovember 8, 2010 at 4:48 PM

    Just wanted to say thanks to all you great people who've been stopping by my little corner of the blogosphere...you are some truly gracious folks.

    @ Shar...appreciate you sis ;-)

    @ She...love and light always. ♥

    @ Philip...thank you sir.

    @ Kunline...you're welcome...and thank you for all the wonderful information you share in your blogs...I really dig that your knitting...that's madd cool.

    @ Abigail you're not the only one that is left speechless after reading...just about every time I check a new post of yours you keep me at a lost for words...what you do with words makes me want to write...(seriously if you want to read some great poetry check her out...you won't be disappointed)

    @ C2N...you make me laugh with the stories you share...I can only image what you do when you get on stage...(^_^)

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  8. AnonymousNovember 8, 2010 at 5:05 PM

    What a terrific opening line...it lead me in to a romantic frame of mind, only to realise that it talks more of a hopeless addiction.

    There is such great beauty in your choice of words. (And perhaps a hint at how this affects you in your choice of title?)

    Thanks for sharing this.

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  9. Sherry Blue SkyNovember 8, 2010 at 5:23 PM

    "for becoming her accidental prince"- there is greath pathos in this- you have a wonderful way with words........love the look of your poem on parchment, and the way it rolls down the page........well done!

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  10. signed...bkmNovember 8, 2010 at 5:57 PM

    this is quite beautiful and romantic...her slave, her accidental prince...lost in the beauty of her poetry....very nice....bkm

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  11. Eileen T O'Neill .....November 9, 2010 at 10:08 AM

    dasuntoucha,
    I'm taken away by your wonderful words. So romantic, yet a little sad too.

    Beautifully written...
    Best wishes, Eileen :)

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  12. Climb2NowhereNovember 9, 2010 at 7:27 PM

    Thanks for the thanks and compliments about my blog, but I seriously look forward to your posts! Your poetry is beautiful and deep. I'm glad I found your site and thanks for always reading all of my stories.

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  13. Abigail Pearl PopeNovember 12, 2010 at 10:41 AM

    Oh dear; I'm blushing. Thanks so much for your kind words, suntoucha, and for recommending my blog. I'd give you a big hug if you were right here. ^-^

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  14. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 14, 2010 at 6:29 AM

    Fabulous,
    you captured the struggles vividly,
    being an accidental prince, wow.
    what a powerful case.
    keep shining.

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  15. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 14, 2010 at 6:29 AM

    http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/11/november-greetings-appreciations.html

    Special awards for you. Happy Sunday! xx
    Hope to see you at our potluck tonight.

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  16. KunlineNovember 14, 2010 at 3:37 PM

    Thank you Dasuntoucha for the compliment!Knitting is mad cool and so zen:) Thank you for recommending Abigail's blog: I love it!!!Ciao

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  17. AnonymousMay 9, 2011 at 11:13 AM

    always feel your word my fine friend...

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