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Monday, January 24, 2011

Midnight Embers



Posted by Dasuntoucha at 8:25 PM
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19 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2011 at 11:02 PM

    lovely and well said my friend- here's mine for this potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/here-for-you/

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2011 at 2:59 AM

    Sounds like you swallowed a Thesaurus! Great variety of vocabularly and a wonderful description.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/dark-teen/

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 25, 2011 at 7:01 AM

    rebirth is painful yet blissful,
    lovely burning poem...
    Thanks for sharing...

    A++

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  4. KunlineJanuary 25, 2011 at 9:58 AM

    Wow...A sublime description of "heated passion"!!!! Thanks for sharing!

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2011 at 1:26 AM

    I really like the last stanza. It's a very intense and detailed illustration you've given! Thanks for sharing it :)

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  6. flaubertJanuary 26, 2011 at 9:28 AM

    Dasuntoucha, some beautiful use of language in this piece. Excellent!
    Pamela

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  7. Rachel HoytJanuary 26, 2011 at 11:36 AM

    What a great poem. It really showcases your extensive vocablulary! :)

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    Love it! I can feel the anxiety and passion somewhere in there... My favorite lines:
    'we
    want
    need wants
    and
    silent pleas
    scream to be heard
    as incendiary incantations...'
    Amazing! ;)

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2011 at 1:48 PM

    Skillful blending of sensuality and spirituality in this one. Really enjoyed it. Some wonderful word choices here.

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  10. Lavonne January 26, 2011 at 5:19 PM

    This was exquisite! You craft your words beautifully as always...I love reading your pieces out loud simply for the way your vocab tickles my tongue :)

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  11. KavitaJanuary 27, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    Breathtakingly beautiful!! The sensuousness and intensity in this were spellbinding, Dasun!!
    Woww!! I got goosebumps reading it!
    Some fabulous wordplay here... most impressive!
    A very very fine offering to Potluck and One Shot!! Awesome!

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 27, 2011 at 12:48 AM

    What Jessica said..

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  13. Bing YapJanuary 27, 2011 at 4:48 AM

    dasuntoucha, what a beautiful sensual piece!

    http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/01/6th-year.html

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  14. Brian MillerJanuary 27, 2011 at 7:10 AM

    nice...love the word play and cranking up the heat...zero gravity tryst...nice.

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  15. ClaudiaJanuary 27, 2011 at 11:06 AM

    fermented in the gardens of another life...nice..

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  16. OliviaJanuary 28, 2011 at 12:54 AM

    Excellent piece of work Das!!
    Very beautifully beaded words to produce a spell binding magical poem..

    Well written.. :)
    Love xxx

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  17. Short PoemsFebruary 10, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    Lovely poem, so nicely written.
    Love it :)

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  18. Climb2NowhereFebruary 23, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    That is hot! Sorry I've been so MIA! Glad I was able to read something new. Your poetry is beautiful as always!

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  19. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2011 at 5:49 PM

    What a luscious and evocative piece of writing! A joy to read and savour...

    Lynette

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