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Wednesday, December 28, 2011

A Thousand Times Deferred



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Posted by Dasuntoucha at 3:02 PM
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19 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 28, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    lovely,

    happy decay, it does happen and another way, life is preserved with the shift.

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  2. ~LDecember 28, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    love the last four lines... i so agree!

    ~L
    http://untitledmoments.com/2011/12/23/i-am-many-free-write-friday/

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  3. Marbles in My PocketDecember 28, 2011 at 6:27 PM

    Some heavy stuff here. A haunting and yet beautiful write.
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/another-will-be-born/

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  4. Jeannette,December 28, 2011 at 7:41 PM

    powerful piece! thanks for sharing...thanks for dropping by my blog. happy new year!

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  5. AnonymousDecember 29, 2011 at 1:26 PM

    Cool.
    I love "amniotic illusions" and "striptease of park riddled trees" - great imagery!

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  6. ZoeDecember 29, 2011 at 2:35 PM

    WOW!!! What incredible verse! I am following your blog. The imagery is intense, I love the rhythm and clever use of rhyme. I can't wait to read more of your work.

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  7. AnonymousDecember 29, 2011 at 5:05 PM

    best read of my day! thank you for sharing your talent (takes a bow) :) I love this, well done!

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  8. AlcinaDecember 29, 2011 at 8:19 PM

    Awesome!
    i loved it..

    Alcina-Breathless

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  9. Elaine DanforthDecember 29, 2011 at 8:42 PM

    Hi Basuntoucha,

    This expression does not seem to be deferred any longer now. For me, this poem seems to speak of what was perhaps earlier unspeakable grief. The handwritten appearance adds to the personal feel of the poem.

    Thank you for reading and commenting on my blog. I appreciate it.

    If it might interest you to see another poem of mine, with what is perhaps a similar feel to this one of yours, see:http://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2010/11/14/the-day-i-lost-you/

    Enjoy the Rally!
    Elaine

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  10. Elaine DanforthDecember 29, 2011 at 8:46 PM

    Sorry I spelled Dasuntoucha wrong.

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  11. AnonymousDecember 30, 2011 at 5:44 AM

    I love the last stanza the best. Let's all try to keep our humanity and live a full existence while we can :)

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  12. AnonymousDecember 30, 2011 at 11:56 AM

    Beautifully written and love the meaning that came through.

    JP

    http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/12/30/my-heart-sings/

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  13. AnonymousDecember 31, 2011 at 6:44 PM

    stunning verse indeed.

    love how you deliver with added art and mood.

    Happy New Year.

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  14. shailJanuary 2, 2012 at 8:53 AM

    Very evocative.

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  15. AnonymousJanuary 3, 2012 at 3:46 PM

    "one can become lost trying to remember a reason to never forget" - that is a wonderful line, and it really reminds me of the tendency to dwell on and try to make something of things we know deep down aren't really for us - thank you for sharing this with us! Here's my offering this week: http://caridwen.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/drafting-the-clock-strikes-inspiration/

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  16. UnknownJanuary 5, 2012 at 12:09 PM

    "One can become lost trying to remember a reason to forget"
    this was captivating! Nice poem!

    -Erick Flores
    http://eflores3000.blogspot.com/2011/10/its-easy-original.html

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  17. Lavonne January 7, 2012 at 7:42 PM

    I love the imagery of your pieces they are sweeping in the way your words wrap the reader from one line to the next :) This piece was reminiscent of Dickinson to me...enjoyed!

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  18. hyperCRYPTICalJanuary 12, 2012 at 10:30 AM

    A wonderful read - alive with imagery.

    Anna :o]

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  19. LindaFebruary 10, 2012 at 1:05 PM

    For me this speaks purpose...Life purpose...sitting around day dreaming we go no where...love it.

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