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Friday, November 4, 2011

Limbo’s Lament



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Posted by Dasuntoucha at 1:34 PM
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10 comments:

  1. JBinford-BellNovember 4, 2011 at 3:25 PM

    Is there a prescribed mourning period for inspiration that has committed suicide?

    Inspired.

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  2. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryNovember 4, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    wow, how deep and profound this is,


    amazing job.

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  3. Climb2NowhereNovember 5, 2011 at 8:30 AM

    I like this. I've definitely wished somebody would just say this is what you should do with your life/time/job/boyfriend/situation etc but let's face it if that happened I'd be like hell no! I know what it's like to have inspiration that has committed suicide. I'm glad your back. Thought provoking poems as always.

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  4. The Orange TreeNovember 5, 2011 at 5:02 PM

    what an elegant piece of poetry.
    wow.

    inspiring words.

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  5. AnonymousNovember 8, 2011 at 8:32 PM

    Nice! Liked the whole thing--lots of strong lines and beautiful flow (interrupted only once by "yeild" :P) . I wrote a much shorter piece of a similar vein:
    http://wordcoaster.wordpress.com/2011/07/15/294/

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  6. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonNovember 17, 2011 at 11:33 AM

    loved your poetry, hope all is well.

    submit to poets rally week 56 today, smiles.

    best wishes.

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  7. Madeleine Begun KaneNovember 21, 2011 at 1:25 AM

    Well done. I can relate.

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  8. Jingle Poetry At Olive GardenNovember 21, 2011 at 6:44 PM

    Greetings,

    hope all is well,

    invite you to join poetry picnic today, simply share a relevant or a random piece, and enjoy!
    Happy Thanksgiving,
    Always, your presence is sunshine to us.
    Best Wishes!

    your talent rocks.
    xoxox

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  9. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonDecember 20, 2011 at 12:02 AM

    Greetings:

    Hope all is well.

    Noting that you have won the perfect poet award for week 58,
    what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
    along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!

    Come join our poetry rallyby Friday if you wish to mingle and get inspired!

    A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.


    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    Looking forward to seeing you share.
    Respect and hugs.
    xoxox

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  10. Lavonne January 7, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    Wouldn't it be so nice if life was color coded lol...do the green stuff now all red stuff between 23-29 avoid all yellow wires...sigh. Sometimes I think even if it was I'd be the one who was color blind :( I dig this for many reasons besides your impeccable use of language :P

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