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Friday, November 4, 2011

Limbo’s Lament



 © 2011 dasuntoucha

11 comments:

  1. Is there a prescribed mourning period for inspiration that has committed suicide?

    Inspired.

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  2. wow, how deep and profound this is,


    amazing job.

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  3. I like this. I've definitely wished somebody would just say this is what you should do with your life/time/job/boyfriend/situation etc but let's face it if that happened I'd be like hell no! I know what it's like to have inspiration that has committed suicide. I'm glad your back. Thought provoking poems as always.

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  4. what an elegant piece of poetry.
    wow.

    inspiring words.

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  5. Nice! Liked the whole thing--lots of strong lines and beautiful flow (interrupted only once by "yeild" :P) . I wrote a much shorter piece of a similar vein:
    http://wordcoaster.wordpress.com/2011/07/15/294/

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  6. loved your poetry, hope all is well.

    submit to poets rally week 56 today, smiles.

    best wishes.

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  7. Greetings,

    hope all is well,

    invite you to join poetry picnic today, simply share a relevant or a random piece, and enjoy!
    Happy Thanksgiving,
    Always, your presence is sunshine to us.
    Best Wishes!

    your talent rocks.
    xoxox

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  8. Hello, you win perfect poet award for week 56, hope that you have enjoyed it.
    It has been a delightful experience with you supporting Thursday Poets Rally, we have enjoyed your presence and talent very much, thumbs up!
    fabulous poetry along the way, keep those gems coming.
    Always, you are more than welcome to join our biweekly rally.
    Happy Holidays!
    smiles.
    xoxox

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  9. Greetings:

    Hope all is well.

    Noting that you have won the perfect poet award for week 58,
    what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
    along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!

    Come join our poetry rallyby Friday if you wish to mingle and get inspired!

    A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.


    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    Looking forward to seeing you share.
    Respect and hugs.
    xoxox

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  10. Wouldn't it be so nice if life was color coded lol...do the green stuff now all red stuff between 23-29 avoid all yellow wires...sigh. Sometimes I think even if it was I'd be the one who was color blind :( I dig this for many reasons besides your impeccable use of language :P

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