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Saturday, October 30, 2010

Cavalcade





Jingle Poetry POETRY POTLUCK
The imaged used in this piece can be found here
 Words by dasuntoucha © 2010 

35 comments:

  1. The last line is very powerful. Nice word play.

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  2. salvation rides shotgun
    with sacrilege


    Nice. I liked the 3-ring circus as a venue for the particular brand of fear you write of, quite effective.

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  3. The last stanza is brutally frank....The truth is often painful. A hard hitting piece but never a dull read.

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  4. I like the circus metaphor, and what's happening 'in tents' :O)

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  5. You're an amazing poet. All of your poems are so thought provoking and full of feelings that are very relatable. That picture is amazing as well!

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  6. I also like "salvation rides shotgun with sacrilege" very much. Like the poem and its intensity within the big top setting.

    Elizabeth

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  7. That was powerful. Gave me the creeps. Take that as a compliment. I think you are very creative.

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  8. I am inspired by your poetry. It is deep and meaningful, very powerful use of words to draw in the reader. Impressive


    Wysteria

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  9. Dear Dasuntoucha...

    Very well done. I have enjoyed your words in past and this one is good too... thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  10. What a strong poem! I had to rush through this, breathless!!

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  11. very powerful and creepy,


    tiptoe work on a wire,
    wow, that is breath taking line....

    thanks for sharing,
    Happy Belated Halloween,
    Happy November.

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  12. this is an fantabulous piece...it's very dark and appropriate for halloween...that last line is a killer...thanks for sharing!

    http://peachpitproduction.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/hallows-eve/

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  13. Love the layout and the ending - my type of poem!!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/halloween-fright/

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  14. Life is a freak show/circus/ brilliant my friend, brilliant!

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  15. short sharp shock .... nice nice nice
    cheers!!!

    here is mine for pot luck its a softie compared to urs :)
    http://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/tricky-treat/

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  16. This is a powerful, creative poem. I enjoy your presentation as well as your words.
    Victoria
    http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/jingles-poetry-potluck-all-hallows-eve/

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  17. Very cool. I love how you work in the circus theme. It makes the message all that more powerful.

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  18. imagery is amazing, deep, well done.

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  19. Abstract emotions take concrete shape in your verse. Superb.

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  20. A wonderfully eerie poem, crafted to strike fear into the heart...well done!

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  21. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/02/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-awards-officially-won-via-votes/

    the celebrate poet of September award for you,
    plus the honorable mention,
    Enjoy!
    u rock!

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  22. Well Done, love the idea of the circus, performing and fear~ Brilliantly interwoven!!!

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  23. Please help giving (belated) birthday wishes to 3 or 4 fellow poets:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/happy-birthday-eric-dom/

    Thanks a lot for the support.
    Happy November!
    Your presence adds light to our space, keep shining!
    xxx

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  24. Ah...I do believe this is my favorite poem out of all the wonderful poetry you create!

    I'm almost jealous...

    ; )

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  25. Very powerful words, laden with a fear for the future, as the ending suggests!

    Excellent poetry prompt.

    Eileen

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  26. OMG...
    This was scary and spooky.......grooooooooooowl.. I do that to keep up my courage and not really scare anyone.. haha

    Very well composed.. I like how you have made it run on trickling......

    Poof!! I go to the next entry now..
    Wnat to know more..? Here- https://oliviasbiopiclog.wordpress.com/2010/10/26/trick-or-treat/

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  27. oh so very beautiful. You always blow me away.

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  28. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-november-4-10/

    how r u?
    Letting you know Poets Rally week 32 is on,
    Drop me your entry if you wish to be part of it.
    Thanks a lot,
    Happy November!
    xxx

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  29. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/06/mondays-child-the-smell-of-life/

    will give you the perfect poet award on week 33,
    I nominated you.
    cheers.
    xxx

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  30. THIS IS SO APPEALING! METAPHOR IN SUPERB USAGE. WOAH,I GIVE IT ALL.

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  31. What a powerful poem and what a true one. Striking visually.

    I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you.

    Hope you had fun with Potluck.

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  32. Powerful, so powerful I hurt inside...
    I have a thing about mirrors always have... something evil somewhere lurks!! (imagination maybe!!) xPenx

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