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Saturday, April 24, 2010

Proportion Control



11 comments:

  1. I must admit I'm guilty.
    Ugh.
    Now that I feel on blast I think i'll
    reevaluate

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  2. Wonderfully crafted poem! Great post!

    -Weasel

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  3. Impressive! I actually thought it was a food label until I read it! Brilliant poem!

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  4. Down with presrvatives. Down with high fructose corn syrup. Health is most important.

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  5. This is phenomenal! I love it! Bravo! Wow, look at all the exclamation points! ha! Really, this is creative. Well done.
    ~Brenda

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  6. very inventive thinking....
    beautiful art.

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  7. This is amazing! I love how you did this, very creative. Health is so important and being a woman we get so many mixed messages about how we should look. I really enjoyed this poem. Great work.

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  8. Oh my goodness, this is just WONDERFULLY creative and fun.........awesome! Inspiring!

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  9. Wonderful, I love how you did this piece...I am always questioning what I eat...an avid label reader...clever and fun...bkm

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  10. Oh, brilliant approach..wonderful poem! Most of us can identify with trying to live up to an ideal, and falling short. Your poem points this out succintly, and with humour. I thouroughly enjoyed it...

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