you just made a sista want to go dancing...masterfully written
Wow well done. It just makes me wonder why I let my fiance go dancing without me the other night lol. Your words create a nearly perfect image of a sultry night on the dance floor. Thank you for sharing.
This is purely amazing! The language is so eloquent and so engaging and the piece itself... flawless.
Whew, I am breathless. Wonderfully seductive!
breath taking words,the image is hot and cool,lovely post!
Pure magic, and breathtaking!! I love it! :-)
Just like the woman described, this poem has got it going on! Beautifully written. I wish I had the words to describe how much I enjoyed it (and the lovely background drawing too).
Wonderfully written poem...definitely hot!
beautiful poem, thank for sharing it is definitely one of my favorite:P
Beauty in words...I love it!It flows so well.....
Wonderful writing! Mesmerizing, hypnotic, sensual - and the last two lines are perfection.