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Sunday, June 6, 2010

Hypnotic Rendering



Painting by Sera M. Knight

11 comments:

  1. you just made a sista want to go dancing...masterfully written

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  2. Wow well done. It just makes me wonder why I let my fiance go dancing without me the other night lol. Your words create a nearly perfect image of a sultry night on the dance floor. Thank you for sharing.

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  3. This is purely amazing! The language is so eloquent and so engaging and the piece itself... flawless.

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  4. Whew, I am breathless. Wonderfully seductive!

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  5. breath taking words,
    the image is hot and cool,
    lovely post!

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  6. Pure magic, and breathtaking!! I love it! :-)

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  7. Just like the woman described, this poem has got it going on! Beautifully written. I wish I had the words to describe how much I enjoyed it (and the lovely background drawing too).

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  8. Wonderfully written poem...definitely hot!

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  9. beautiful poem, thank for sharing it is definitely one of my favorite:P

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  10. Wonderful writing! Mesmerizing, hypnotic, sensual - and the last two lines are perfection.

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