This is just so very powerful, 12 words that say so much, I've read it over and over, just brilliant!
I really like this! I love the juxtaposition of 'slave' and 'free' water - add that to the picture you used and it makes a really powerful statement.I look forward to reading more of your writing. :-)
I agree this is powerful, truth bearing and soulful!
Wow...short...simple....so very powerful...Nice...
smart.love the message in it.beautiful job!
Thanks for the support...Happy Poetry potluck!
I can feel the thirst...fantastic piece! I admire the power and simplicity of deliverence!
very interesting.. i liked it so much.. as I love short verses this is going to be one of my favorites...ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Smart move combining runaway slave with the word FREE. I likey. ^^
i love the pic because it gives credence to the simple yet strong words
Short but powerful!!!!