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Saturday, July 3, 2010

Escapee




Jingle Poetry POETRY POTLUCK
Posted by Dasuntoucha at 4:59 PM
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11 comments:

  1. DeborahAugust 29, 2010 at 4:53 AM

    This is just so very powerful, 12 words that say so much, I've read it over and over, just brilliant!

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  2. SusannahAugust 29, 2010 at 5:09 AM

    I really like this! I love the juxtaposition of 'slave' and 'free' water - add that to the picture you used and it makes a really powerful statement.

    I look forward to reading more of your writing. :-)

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  3. EllaAugust 29, 2010 at 5:49 PM

    I agree this is powerful, truth bearing and soulful!

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  4. Serving Hugs on a Platter and Tears in a TeacupAugust 31, 2010 at 7:11 PM

    Wow...short...simple....so very powerful...

    Nice...

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  5. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 4, 2010 at 6:21 PM

    smart.
    love the message in it.
    beautiful job!

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 4, 2010 at 6:22 PM

    Thanks for the support...
    Happy Poetry potluck!

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  7. Lovely AnnieOctober 4, 2010 at 6:55 PM

    I can feel the thirst...fantastic piece! I admire the power and simplicity of deliverence!

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  8. Shashidhar SharmaOctober 5, 2010 at 6:00 AM

    very interesting.. i liked it so much.. as I love short verses this is going to be one of my favorites...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
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  9. AnonymousOctober 6, 2010 at 4:39 AM

    Smart move combining runaway slave with the word FREE. I likey. ^^

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  10. AnonymousOctober 11, 2010 at 5:39 AM

    i love the pic because it gives credence to the simple yet strong words

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  11. AnonymousOctober 13, 2010 at 5:53 PM

    Short but powerful!!!!

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