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Saturday, July 3, 2010

Escapee




Jingle Poetry POETRY POTLUCK

11 comments:

  1. This is just so very powerful, 12 words that say so much, I've read it over and over, just brilliant!

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  2. I really like this! I love the juxtaposition of 'slave' and 'free' water - add that to the picture you used and it makes a really powerful statement.

    I look forward to reading more of your writing. :-)

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  3. I agree this is powerful, truth bearing and soulful!

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  4. smart.
    love the message in it.
    beautiful job!

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  5. Thanks for the support...
    Happy Poetry potluck!

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  6. I can feel the thirst...fantastic piece! I admire the power and simplicity of deliverence!

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  7. very interesting.. i liked it so much.. as I love short verses this is going to be one of my favorites...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  8. Smart move combining runaway slave with the word FREE. I likey. ^^

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  9. i love the pic because it gives credence to the simple yet strong words

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  10. Short but powerful!!!!

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