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Tuesday, July 6, 2010

Decadent Decimation


 

The
fairytale
facade
is always
inviting
enticing
the mind
to feats of
enchantment
that forget even
the most well
built dream
can erode right
in front of
your
eyes.




Jingle Poetry POETRY POTLUCK
© 2009, 2010 dasuntoucha
Posted by Dasuntoucha at 7:34 PM
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15 comments:

  1. KatieJuly 6, 2010 at 8:09 PM

    I really like the rhythm on this one... I feel like I could almost hear you reading it out loud, slam-like. Really lovely imagery.

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  2. Connie ArnoldJuly 11, 2010 at 11:43 AM

    Well done! I've been enjoying reading your poems.

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 8, 2010 at 6:35 PM

    true, dreams could fade in front of our eyes.
    super lovely piece.

    the image on top is very powerful..



    Here is one of my entries, an award is attached, thanks for the support.

    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-sister-lives-too-far-away/

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  4. ReflectionsNovember 8, 2010 at 7:41 PM

    I love this piece... yet still fairy tales live on, though they can fade with time to a slightly less colorful version.

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  5. AnonymousNovember 8, 2010 at 8:03 PM

    hmmm- short and neat- well phrased..

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  6. AmityNovember 8, 2010 at 11:40 PM

    short but beautifully written...the photo is like a fantasy island...:-)almost paradise!!!

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  7. AnonymousNovember 9, 2010 at 3:28 AM

    very neat, I loved the idea you put across here! Great selection of words.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-fortress/

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  8. Shashidhar SharmaNovember 9, 2010 at 5:11 AM

    How true... even the most well built can erode, right in front of our eyes.. that is times erosion wheel.. I liked it so much.. thanks

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  9. Uma AnandaneNovember 9, 2010 at 5:15 AM

    lovely fairy tale...nice image

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  10. Dave KingNovember 9, 2010 at 6:34 AM

    I very much like your take on it.

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  11. AnonymousNovember 9, 2010 at 11:14 AM

    Great perception of how quickly dreams can fade away.

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  12. AnonymousNovember 11, 2010 at 12:00 PM

    nice piece. loved the lines - fairytale facade - playful and fun. excellent job!

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  13. AnonymousNovember 11, 2010 at 7:47 PM

    This was racy and fascinating...
    It really a facade indeed! They make you imagine the best, and then they just evaporate...leaving behind a parched soul!

    Oh... this is a beautiful poem, Dasun... I enjoyed the directness of it!!!

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  14. OliviaNovember 12, 2010 at 1:02 AM

    wow!!
    What an ethereal kind- touch and go- left with only dreams and imaginations alone..

    DasD, well done.. :)
    Love xx

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  15. OliviaNovember 12, 2010 at 1:02 AM

    Glad to visit you today again
    We treasure your input at our group poetry efforts and would be thrilled to see you again this coming Monday.
    Any poem is acceptable, simply share and enjoy...
    Keep writing, Keep inspiring!
    xoxox

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