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Sunday, November 14, 2010

Devoted Agony



Posted by Dasuntoucha at 7:56 PM
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25 comments:

  1. Renee AntonelliNovember 14, 2010 at 8:02 PM

    Awesome my Dear.
    I would love to sequal this

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  2. signed...bkmNovember 14, 2010 at 8:41 PM

    Wow...much said here and that measure of infatuation with someone...believe most have felt it with someone, somewhere in life...it is agony indeed..bkm

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  3. flaubertNovember 14, 2010 at 9:02 PM

    Ooh, this is so full of emotion. The wanting of someone that is just out of reach. Nice.
    Pamela

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  4. AnonymousNovember 14, 2010 at 11:39 PM

    you are a very versatile word player- greaT!

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  5. JinksyNovember 15, 2010 at 2:41 AM

    There's s lot to be said for things being all in the mind! LOL :)

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  6. Bing YapNovember 15, 2010 at 4:57 AM

    wow, this is too intense! being in love with a good friend is sweet agony indeed. maybe it's time to tell. ;)

    Bye For Now

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  7. Climb2NowhereNovember 15, 2010 at 5:19 AM

    Amazing! Falling in love/lust with a friend is tough! This describes it really well......love it!

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  8. Linda Jones MalonsonNovember 15, 2010 at 5:33 AM

    I love this .. the last stanza didn't quite flow as well as the others, but this is very creative, even if these old eyes had a hard time reading the font ... still it was a deep and insightful piece, and I know this place!

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  9. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 15, 2010 at 8:07 AM

    lovely piece,
    you hold back, you love, and your mind dance on the blade of sin...

    brilliant words...
    a magnificent piece in portraying forbidden love.
    Thanks for sharing with potluck poetry.
    Happy Monday.

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  10. AnonymousNovember 15, 2010 at 8:51 AM

    very identifiable topic to so many and feelings so well described..great write

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyNovember 15, 2010 at 9:49 AM

    Wonderfully written. If you get up the courage to confess, write another poem and let us know how it goes:)

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  12. AnonymousNovember 15, 2010 at 9:59 AM

    A slick write, to give a darkness to what some would wish delight!

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  13. Brother OllieNovember 15, 2010 at 9:59 AM

    Intense and full of passion! What a muse...

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  14. AnonymousNovember 15, 2010 at 10:36 AM

    I wrote a comment and it was deleted by accident...
    Long story short

    I dig your words...I've said it so many times...and I will keep saying it.
    Man, I love this!

    You perform?

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  15. AnonymousNovember 15, 2010 at 1:37 PM

    great poem on desire. good use of language. nice job!

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  16. Abigail Pearl PopeNovember 15, 2010 at 6:45 PM

    Almost brought me to tears, especially the second-to-last stanza.
    It's the casual touches which mean nothing to one and everything to the other that's heartbreaking.

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  17. Shashidhar SharmaNovember 15, 2010 at 11:40 PM

    I liked this so much.. thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  18. Anita MagdalenaNovember 16, 2010 at 12:27 AM

    I love how you have expressed ones secret desires of a friend.

    Anita.

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  19. OliviaNovember 16, 2010 at 5:00 AM

    What a rhythmic composition.. I almost sang it to myself.. This can very well be converted to a song with the same words.. The power of this composition filled me up.. :)

    Love xx

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  20. AnonymousNovember 16, 2010 at 6:06 AM

    Very powerful, and sensual! Wow!

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  21. hedgewitchNovember 16, 2010 at 8:55 AM

    Simply phrased and nicely summed up; a contorted pleasure/pain is so hard to resist...Enjoyed it very much.

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  22. AnonymousNovember 16, 2010 at 12:12 PM

    "Totality" identify!

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  23. ShadiatiqueNovember 17, 2010 at 10:47 AM

    Great work... Thanks for sharing

    S.

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  24. AnonymousNovember 17, 2010 at 1:31 PM

    WOWWW!! Honest and awesome!!
    It takes courage to ask for such a punishment too, you know...
    Really, this was an absolutely fantastic take on the theme, Dasun!! I cannot tell you much I loved reading and rereading this one!!
    And the fonts you have chosen for the poem - that too is kinda perfect for the feeling you are trying to express here... really too good!!

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  25. AnonymousDecember 5, 2010 at 3:54 PM

    Agony in love is just especially if the person we love doesn't know about it. I have been there too. Well written poem, musical.

    Thank you for dropping by my blog.

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