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Thursday, October 14, 2010

Lingering




Painting by Unknown Artist
Words by dasuntoucha © 2010

27 comments:

  1. Beautiful, sorrowful, and definitely colorful:) Good response to the prompt........

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  2. The whole part that's written in black type is my favorite part. Such a sense of longing and nostalgia you captured there!

    Also the way it starts out with

    "The
    Dream
    ..."

    each of the words getting its own line makes the beginning seem reluctant and languid. Very effective. <3

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  3. interesting blog.
    Now following you :)
    Beautiful

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  4. I love 'the watercolour of my reality spills...'

    Beautiful. :-)

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  5. Love the colours in the poem and image, the fading into languor as poem progresses matched by image's colour strands fading to pastels.

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  6. Smooth poem - keep that flow going!

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  7. The Moon
    shines
    on a cat

    Meow

    As a native Swede, I am particularly proud of my love poetry suite Sonnets for Katie.

    My Poems

    My wallpaper art Babes!

    Sexuality introduces Death to Being; and indeed Life simultaneously. This is the profound Myth of the Eden. The work of the Serpent. Bringing us out of "blessed" Standstill. So, in contrast to the mindless pietism of vulgar Christianity, my personal "Christo-Satanism" should be given serious thought by the Enlightened Few, the Pneumatics, the 1% Outlaws. The Light Bringer must be rehabilitated, beacause if not, the All of it simply doesn't make sense: true Catholicism is necessarily Meta Catholicism.

    My philosophy

    My poetry in French:

    Poétudes

    My poetry in German:

    Fremde Gedichte

    And: reciprocity: for mutual benefit, you will do me a favor promoting your own blog on mine!

    Yours,

    - Peter Ingestad, Sweden

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  8. This is delightful and beautiful...i love it!
    :-)

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  9. Love the presentation! Awesome post! =)

    -Weasel

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  10. Wow, I can vividly see all you wrote; Really lovely~

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  11. hints of the necter...lingers in mind..such a beautiful words you chose to write.Loveky!

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  12. Very nice. I like how you presented this.

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  13. Wow talk about a lovers poem! Your use of color was wonderful and the "breeze of my mind" ...so romantic and yet so sad.

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  14. This flows so beautifully and is so very soft and loving! I like the presentation very much also.

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  15. I'm in love how every word is connected to the next. Beautifully writtin .<3xo

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  16. Silence. Followed by a thundering applause.

    You deserve a thundering ovation for this.

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  17. Dasuntoucha,

    An extremely pleasant read which more than evokes colourful thoughts...

    Best wishes, Eileen

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  18. dasuntoucha,
    Beautifully poetic words.
    Pamela

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  19. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/20/thursday-poets-rally-week-31-october-21-27/
    I invite you to attend Thursday Poets Rally week 31
    let me know when you are ready.
    Thanks a lot.

    two awards for this week’s participation.

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  20. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/23/6244/
    Three awards for you, I value your participation at Jingle poetry during past weeks, hope to see you again tonight. Our theme is love and romance, have fun sharing! xxx

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  21. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/poetry-awards/poetry-awards-4-thursday-poets-rally-week-31-participants/

    these awards are for participation of Thursday Poets Rally week 31.
    different from Jingle poetry Potluck awards.
    Enjoy!
    I valued your support.
    xxx

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  22. this was so beautiful, i loved it. such a dormant passion

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  23. Beautiful and vivid, full of passion. Thanks for sharing!

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