Painting by Unknown Artist
Words by dasuntoucha © 2010
Amiri Baraka's "Dope" on PennSound
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PennSound has three versions of Amiri Baraka reading his poem "Dope." I've
been blogging about Baraka and that poem for years -- in 2011, 2018, 2019,
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8 hours ago
Beautiful, sorrowful, and definitely colorful:) Good response to the prompt........
ReplyDeleteThe whole part that's written in black type is my favorite part. Such a sense of longing and nostalgia you captured there!
ReplyDeleteAlso the way it starts out with
"The
Dream
..."
each of the words getting its own line makes the beginning seem reluctant and languid. Very effective. <3
interesting blog.
ReplyDeleteNow following you :)
Beautiful
I love 'the watercolour of my reality spills...'
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. :-)
This is a bright splash of colour.
ReplyDeleteLove the colours in the poem and image, the fading into languor as poem progresses matched by image's colour strands fading to pastels.
ReplyDeleteSmooth poem - keep that flow going!
ReplyDeleteThis is delightful and beautiful...i love it!
ReplyDelete:-)
Love the presentation! Awesome post! =)
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amazing color poem!
ReplyDeletekeep shining!
Wow, I can vividly see all you wrote; Really lovely~
ReplyDeletehints of the necter...lingers in mind..such a beautiful words you chose to write.Loveky!
ReplyDeleteVery nice. I like how you presented this.
ReplyDeleteWow talk about a lovers poem! Your use of color was wonderful and the "breeze of my mind" ...so romantic and yet so sad.
ReplyDeleteThis flows so beautifully and is so very soft and loving! I like the presentation very much also.
ReplyDeleteI'm in love how every word is connected to the next. Beautifully writtin .<3xo
ReplyDeleteSilence. Followed by a thundering applause.
ReplyDeleteYou deserve a thundering ovation for this.
Dasuntoucha,
ReplyDeleteAn extremely pleasant read which more than evokes colourful thoughts...
Best wishes, Eileen
Beautiful as always! So moving!
ReplyDeletedasuntoucha,
ReplyDeleteBeautifully poetic words.
Pamela
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/20/thursday-poets-rally-week-31-october-21-27/
ReplyDeleteI invite you to attend Thursday Poets Rally week 31
let me know when you are ready.
Thanks a lot.
two awards for this week’s participation.
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/poetry-awards/poetry-awards-4-thursday-poets-rally-week-31-participants/
ReplyDeletethese awards are for participation of Thursday Poets Rally week 31.
different from Jingle poetry Potluck awards.
Enjoy!
I valued your support.
xxx
this was so beautiful, i loved it. such a dormant passion
ReplyDeleteCalm...Beautiful and Sweet!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and vivid, full of passion. Thanks for sharing!
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