This is incredibly beautiful - best thing I've read tonight. Mystical and magical, and draws one along on a cosmic voyage. I loved the journey!
Ahh...I loved this. Reading it felt like eating chocolate :-)
Beautiful poetry! I especially like sipping on that ambrosia!
I like sipping on ambrosia under the Serengetti stars.
Beautiful flow, lending to dreams imaginable like sipping ambrosia under stars... wonderful write.
Beautiful words and so mystic...Eileen
great choice of words and line formation. here's mine! http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/
very good,full of images nice write
What a journey!
Wow, this is lovely. So many beautiful lines.Pamela
love the possibilities in infinity.divine writing...A+
Very creative...I loved it :)
Simply lovely --especially the sequestered cosmos...bkm
Wow, this is amazing! The first stanza itself blew my mind! Great poem!
Great great poem! Beautiful and Mystical! Thank you!infinite possibilities...Merci!
A beautiful breathtaking vision.Anita.
Beautiful, I loved the way you took us on a journey with your words. A poetic mariner...wonderful.
I enjoy the journey, it si a great one for sure ;D
This is breathtaking word-play and amazing otherworldly imagery.. great job done here!Regards~ Sayandeep
Amazing marriage of spirit and nature. I love your choice of verbs.
So many delicate things to enjoy in this poem.:)
You capture moods and feelings so beautifully. This poem is so inspired. I love "fishing in the sea of her waking dreams." Just gorgeous!
I loved the flow of this...it was distinctly dreamy and the imagery was beautiful...
love it. :)
Nicely written, I felt a floating on each line. It is incredibly visual.Thanks for sharing your workWysteria
Have a beautiful day! Award/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Thursday!
I'm all for infinite possibilities..
this is truly lovely...what a wonderful picture. possibilities are always endless. like a breath of fresh airhere's my link:http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2010/12/11/smoke-signals/
Ahhh/.... so dreamy, and how very beautifully worded, Dasun! The idea of endless possibilities is absolutely intoxicating!!! A lovely poem!!!
This is the kind of poetry we ( people in the medical field) would have loved playing with when we were up late at night to add some levity.it's a beautiful piece I just love the coronary cadences beating to the melody...Moondustwriter