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Sunday, December 5, 2010

Oblivion Non Grata





Jingle Poetry POETRY POTLUCK

30 comments:

  1. This is incredibly beautiful - best thing I've read tonight. Mystical and magical, and draws one along on a cosmic voyage. I loved the journey!

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  2. Ahh...I loved this. Reading it felt like eating chocolate :-)

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  3. Beautiful poetry! I especially like sipping on that ambrosia!

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  4. I like sipping on ambrosia under the Serengetti stars.

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  5. Beautiful flow, lending to dreams imaginable like sipping ambrosia under stars... wonderful write.

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  6. great choice of words and line formation. here's mine! http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/

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  7. very good,full of images nice write

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  8. Wow, this is lovely. So many beautiful lines.
    Pamela

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  9. love the possibilities in infinity.
    divine writing...

    A+

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  10. Simply lovely --especially the sequestered cosmos...bkm

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  11. Wow, this is amazing! The first stanza itself blew my mind! Great poem!

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  12. Great great poem! Beautiful and Mystical! Thank you!infinite possibilities...Merci!

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  13. A beautiful breathtaking vision.

    Anita.

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  14. Beautiful, I loved the way you took us on a journey with your words. A poetic mariner...wonderful.

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  15. I enjoy the journey, it si a great one for sure ;D

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  16. This is breathtaking word-play and amazing otherworldly imagery.. great job done here!
    Regards~ Sayandeep

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  17. Amazing marriage of spirit and nature. I love your choice of verbs.

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  18. So many delicate things to enjoy in this poem.
    :)

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  19. You capture moods and feelings so beautifully. This poem is so inspired. I love "fishing in the sea of her waking dreams." Just gorgeous!

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  20. I loved the flow of this...it was distinctly dreamy and the imagery was beautiful...

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  21. Nicely written, I felt a floating on each line. It is incredibly visual.

    Thanks for sharing your work

    Wysteria

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  22. I'm all for infinite possibilities..

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  23. this is truly lovely...what a wonderful picture. possibilities are always endless. like a breath of fresh air
    here's my link:
    http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2010/12/11/smoke-signals/

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  24. Ahhh/.... so dreamy, and how very beautifully worded, Dasun!
    The idea of endless possibilities is absolutely intoxicating!!! A lovely poem!!!

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  25. This is the kind of poetry we ( people in the medical field) would have loved playing with when we were up late at night to add some levity.

    it's a beautiful piece I just love the coronary cadences beating to the melody...

    Moondustwriter

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