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Sunday, December 5, 2010

Oblivion Non Grata





Jingle Poetry POETRY POTLUCK
Posted by Dasuntoucha at 8:10 PM
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30 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyDecember 5, 2010 at 10:18 PM

    This is incredibly beautiful - best thing I've read tonight. Mystical and magical, and draws one along on a cosmic voyage. I loved the journey!

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  2. Flying MonkeyDecember 6, 2010 at 12:23 AM

    Ahh...I loved this. Reading it felt like eating chocolate :-)

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  3. Diane TDecember 6, 2010 at 4:49 AM

    Beautiful poetry! I especially like sipping on that ambrosia!

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  4. Strummed wordsDecember 6, 2010 at 5:24 AM

    I like sipping on ambrosia under the Serengetti stars.

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  5. ReflectionsDecember 6, 2010 at 6:19 AM

    Beautiful flow, lending to dreams imaginable like sipping ambrosia under stars... wonderful write.

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  6. Eileen T O'Neill .....December 6, 2010 at 6:39 AM

    Beautiful words and so mystic...

    Eileen

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  7. AnonymousDecember 6, 2010 at 7:26 AM

    great choice of words and line formation. here's mine! http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/

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  8. AnonymousDecember 6, 2010 at 7:53 AM

    very good,full of images nice write

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  9. Brother OllieDecember 6, 2010 at 9:10 AM

    What a journey!

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  10. flaubertDecember 6, 2010 at 11:56 AM

    Wow, this is lovely. So many beautiful lines.
    Pamela

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  11. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 6, 2010 at 12:58 PM

    love the possibilities in infinity.
    divine writing...

    A+

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  12. eyeographyDecember 6, 2010 at 1:50 PM

    Very creative...
    I loved it :)

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  13. signed...bkmDecember 6, 2010 at 2:27 PM

    Simply lovely --especially the sequestered cosmos...bkm

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  14. AnonymousDecember 6, 2010 at 7:46 PM

    Wow, this is amazing! The first stanza itself blew my mind! Great poem!

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  15. KunlineDecember 6, 2010 at 10:57 PM

    Great great poem! Beautiful and Mystical! Thank you!infinite possibilities...Merci!

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  16. Anita MagdalenaDecember 7, 2010 at 1:21 AM

    A beautiful breathtaking vision.

    Anita.

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  17. SusannahDecember 7, 2010 at 2:51 AM

    Beautiful, I loved the way you took us on a journey with your words. A poetic mariner...wonderful.

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  18. RiikaInfinityyDecember 7, 2010 at 4:19 AM

    I enjoy the journey, it si a great one for sure ;D

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  19. Sayandeep KunduDecember 7, 2010 at 9:47 AM

    This is breathtaking word-play and amazing otherworldly imagery.. great job done here!
    Regards~ Sayandeep

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  20. AnonymousDecember 7, 2010 at 10:23 AM

    Amazing marriage of spirit and nature. I love your choice of verbs.

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  21. Lydia KangDecember 7, 2010 at 6:56 PM

    So many delicate things to enjoy in this poem.
    :)

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  22. Climb2NowhereDecember 8, 2010 at 6:14 AM

    You capture moods and feelings so beautifully. This poem is so inspired. I love "fishing in the sea of her waking dreams." Just gorgeous!

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  23. TALONDecember 8, 2010 at 7:46 AM

    I loved the flow of this...it was distinctly dreamy and the imagery was beautiful...

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  24. AnonymousDecember 8, 2010 at 6:38 PM

    love it. :)

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  25. WysteriaDecember 9, 2010 at 5:59 AM

    Nicely written, I felt a floating on each line. It is incredibly visual.

    Thanks for sharing your work

    Wysteria

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  26. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 9, 2010 at 9:52 AM

    Have a beautiful day!

    Award/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Thursday!

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  27. JinksyDecember 11, 2010 at 1:16 AM

    I'm all for infinite possibilities..

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  28. AnonymousDecember 12, 2010 at 2:37 PM

    this is truly lovely...what a wonderful picture. possibilities are always endless. like a breath of fresh air
    here's my link:
    http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2010/12/11/smoke-signals/

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  29. KavitaDecember 13, 2010 at 11:28 AM

    Ahhh/.... so dreamy, and how very beautifully worded, Dasun!
    The idea of endless possibilities is absolutely intoxicating!!! A lovely poem!!!

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  30. One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and ArtistsDecember 15, 2010 at 8:55 PM

    This is the kind of poetry we ( people in the medical field) would have loved playing with when we were up late at night to add some levity.

    it's a beautiful piece I just love the coronary cadences beating to the melody...

    Moondustwriter

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