I like that you always take care with the form of the poem, it is actually quite hard to push the words into a shape, it takes a lot of consideration when selecting the phrases to use.
It's a beautiful poem as always. It brightens an otherwise ordinary day. I also like the backdrop which you wrote it on as well.
Pretty Intense..Interesting presentation..
what a creative poem,love your cool taste and willingness to share.
Happy Thursday!we love fresh talent and hope that you enjoy reading others.
great with the water ripple backround great
You weave words into images that connect in unexpected waya...and I am so thankful to have the opportunity to read what you willingly share.write on man!peace,Annie
Nice form to a beautiful piece!
Love your metaphors and paired associations, creative format. Glad jingle found you or you found jungle, a beautiful poem to read and savory.Cheers,Joanny
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Gasp! This is stunning, darling. Remarkable. I love the visuals.
Very nice poem with some evocative words and images.
You just made my entire day with your confession, honey. Thank you. So sincerely, thank you.
very powerfully written, especially the ending. This is my type of poem.
oh what an innovative way to express your thoughts.. mine for the Rally is at ~~this post~~
I love the form of this poem - a very liquid poème concrète! Great images. Who or what is Occam?
Very well written. I love it. Bisous, Love and Light, Sender
I love this form and imagery in this poem. The addition of Occam's razor at the end really makes you think. The simplest explanation is usually the correct one...hmmmm
I love where this poem took my mind. It was wonderful.
totally loved it... i commend your creativity...am glad that i visited :)
This is very beautifully written poem, love every word of it.very creativesee me on http://loveamongotherthings.wordpress.com/cheers
I'm into this. Especially the form!
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