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Monday, September 6, 2010

Her Return

24 comments:

  1. I like that you always take care with the form of the poem, it is actually quite hard to push the words into a shape, it takes a lot of consideration when selecting the phrases to use.

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  2. It's a beautiful poem as always. It brightens an otherwise ordinary day. I also like the backdrop which you wrote it on as well.

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  3. Pretty Intense..
    Interesting presentation..

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  4. what a creative poem,

    love your cool taste and willingness to share.

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  5. Happy Thursday!
    we love fresh talent and hope that you enjoy reading others.

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  6. great with the water ripple backround great

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  7. You weave words into images that connect in unexpected waya...and I am so thankful to have the opportunity to read what you willingly share.

    write on man!

    peace,
    Annie

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  8. Love your metaphors and paired associations, creative format. Glad jingle found you or you found jungle, a beautiful poem to read and savory.

    Cheers,
    Joanny

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  9. @ Missy...with each attempt I learn a little more

    @ ClimbtoNowhere...always enjoy it when you stop by (^_^)

    @ oliviasmindlymatters...thank you for introducing me to the Poets Rally

    @ Jingle...LOVE the Poets Rally...there's a wealth of talent to be read there :-)

    @ THE BEATY...thanks for stopping by.

    @ lovelyannie79...you're the bee's knees (^_^) Glad you reached out...you're quickly become a favorite fellow blogger :-)

    @ Dennis Go...thanks man...again, I really enjoyed reading your work.

    @ joanny...thank you for the kind words...love being amongst talented writer folk as yourself.

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  10. Gasp! This is stunning, darling. Remarkable. I love the visuals.

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  11. Very nice poem with some evocative words and images.

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  12. You just made my entire day with your confession, honey. Thank you. So sincerely, thank you.

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  13. very powerfully written, especially the ending. This is my type of poem.

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  14. oh what an innovative way to express your thoughts..

    mine for the Rally is at
    ~~this post~~

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  15. I love the form of this poem - a very liquid poème concrète! Great images. Who or what is Occam?

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  16. Very well written. I love it. Bisous, Love and Light, Sender

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  17. I love this form and imagery in this poem. The addition of Occam's razor at the end really makes you think. The simplest explanation is usually the correct one...hmmmm

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  18. I love where this poem took my mind. It was wonderful.

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  19. totally loved it... i commend your creativity...
    am glad that i visited :)

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  20. This is very beautifully written poem, love every word of it.
    very creative
    see me on http://loveamongotherthings.wordpress.com/
    cheers

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  21. I'm into this. Especially the form!

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    u r nominated, u win 1 vote automatically,
    if you vote for other bloggers, u win another vote…
    have fun!

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  23. http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html

    Hello, friend:

    Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
    Thanks in advance.
    Hope to see you in our lovely potluck…

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