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Monday, January 24, 2011

Midnight Embers



21 comments:

  1. lovely and well said my friend- here's mine for this potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/here-for-you/

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  2. Sounds like you swallowed a Thesaurus! Great variety of vocabularly and a wonderful description.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/dark-teen/

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  3. rebirth is painful yet blissful,
    lovely burning poem...
    Thanks for sharing...

    A++

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  4. Wow...A sublime description of "heated passion"!!!! Thanks for sharing!

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  5. I really like the last stanza. It's a very intense and detailed illustration you've given! Thanks for sharing it :)

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  6. Dasuntoucha, some beautiful use of language in this piece. Excellent!
    Pamela

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  7. What a great poem. It really showcases your extensive vocablulary! :)

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  8. Love it! I can feel the anxiety and passion somewhere in there... My favorite lines:
    'we
    want
    need wants
    and
    silent pleas
    scream to be heard
    as incendiary incantations...'
    Amazing! ;)

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  9. Skillful blending of sensuality and spirituality in this one. Really enjoyed it. Some wonderful word choices here.

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  10. This was exquisite! You craft your words beautifully as always...I love reading your pieces out loud simply for the way your vocab tickles my tongue :)

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  11. Breathtakingly beautiful!! The sensuousness and intensity in this were spellbinding, Dasun!!
    Woww!! I got goosebumps reading it!
    Some fabulous wordplay here... most impressive!
    A very very fine offering to Potluck and One Shot!! Awesome!

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  12. dasuntoucha, what a beautiful sensual piece!

    http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/01/6th-year.html

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  13. nice...love the word play and cranking up the heat...zero gravity tryst...nice.

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  14. fermented in the gardens of another life...nice..

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  15. Excellent piece of work Das!!
    Very beautifully beaded words to produce a spell binding magical poem..

    Well written.. :)
    Love xxx

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  16. Greetings…

    Please help visit a few poets 2 wish them happy birthdays, Thanks!

    Your contribution to our community is highly valued!
    Keep up the excellence!
    Cheers!

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  17. Lovely poem, so nicely written.
    Love it :)

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  18. Greetings, how are you?
    Your absence is missed, hope you well…
    Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!

    Hope to see you in,

    Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.

    Cheers.
    xoxox

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  19. That is hot! Sorry I've been so MIA! Glad I was able to read something new. Your poetry is beautiful as always!

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  20. What a luscious and evocative piece of writing! A joy to read and savour...

    Lynette

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