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Sunday, September 26, 2010

It Feels Like...




Jingle Poetry POETRY POTLUCK

© 2008, 2010 dasuntoucha

33 comments:

  1. ......oh to be in that place where i've lost my way back to that existence draped with disdain....
    i will never EVER get enough of your pen....mmph

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  2. That was like a kiss from a loved one. I needed it.

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  3. Oooh, I love this and really like the way you present your stuff!

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  4. Beautifully written, and wonderful presentation of your work! =)

    -Weasel

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  5. "...where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer..."

    Nice :-)

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  6. I, too, especially loved "where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer".......great line. I enjoyed this poem, well done!

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  7. All I have to say is..
    Wow.

    (In a good way, of course)

    -LJ

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  8. Wonderfully written, love your words!=P

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  9. it feels like morning breeze,

    love your word play and the images your words evoke.
    stunning poem!

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  10. This poem gives me a feeling of peacefulness!

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  11. You have a unique way with words. Very creative!

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  12. Lovely I would love to levitate to that place where wishes piggyback on the wings of prayer...wow!

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  13. What a diplomatic and serene poem! A joy to read!

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  14. Wow, wonderfully written and I love the way you set out your poem, just wonderful!!

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  15. My favorite line was "where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer"

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  16. "Where wishes piggyback
    On the wings of a prayer"

    One of the most beautiful lines I've every read in my life. Literally.
    Breathtaking

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  17. beautiful imagery... love the "cheeks/ etched with traces/ of a pillow stained/ monsoon..."

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  18. Thanks for the beautiful participation at poetry potluck, Happy Wednesday!

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  19. The undulating rhythm keeps the reader entranced.

    It really is a thing to feel so entwined.

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  20. straight dope bruh!

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  21. Oh! this is such a beautiful poem. I love the vocab, wording and imagery. It all melds together so nicely. well done, Bravo!!

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  22. Love the imagery that flow within the poem =D great to be here!^^~

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  23. I'll bet you could have kept going with the "It feels like..." stanzas - it seemed you had plenty to say, maybe more than you did. Nice piece.

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  24. Absolutely exquisite poem!

    http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/10/08/room-for-romance-old-love/

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  25. beautiful - would love to hear it read - that feeling - you described it so very well...lovely...bkm

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  26. This is a simply wonderful poem with undertones of peace and a sense of eternity. Nice work. Fine contribution to potluck. Thank you.

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  27. creative, filled with lovely imagery and more! I second BKM, would love to hear it read! :D

    My Potluck Is Here.

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