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Sunday, September 26, 2010

It Feels Like...




Jingle Poetry POETRY POTLUCK

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Posted by Dasuntoucha at 11:55 AM
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33 comments:

  1. DenyceSeptember 26, 2010 at 12:03 PM

    ......oh to be in that place where i've lost my way back to that existence draped with disdain....
    i will never EVER get enough of your pen....mmph

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  2. Brooklyn ChoiceSeptember 26, 2010 at 12:36 PM

    That was like a kiss from a loved one. I needed it.

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  3. SusannahSeptember 26, 2010 at 1:38 PM

    Oooh, I love this and really like the way you present your stuff!

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  4. flaubertSeptember 26, 2010 at 2:18 PM

    Oh, how beautiful!
    Pamela

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  5. WeaselSeptember 26, 2010 at 3:06 PM

    Beautifully written, and wonderful presentation of your work! =)

    -Weasel

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  6. Paul Andrew RussellSeptember 26, 2010 at 3:23 PM

    "...where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer..."

    Nice :-)

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  7. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 26, 2010 at 3:31 PM

    I, too, especially loved "where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer".......great line. I enjoyed this poem, well done!

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  8. Lillian JaneSeptember 26, 2010 at 3:44 PM

    All I have to say is..
    Wow.

    (In a good way, of course)

    -LJ

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  9. RiikaInfinityySeptember 26, 2010 at 4:59 PM

    Wonderfully written, love your words!=P

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  10. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 26, 2010 at 5:13 PM

    it feels like morning breeze,

    love your word play and the images your words evoke.
    stunning poem!

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  11. MarySeptember 26, 2010 at 5:21 PM

    This poem gives me a feeling of peacefulness!

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  12. CarinaSeptember 26, 2010 at 5:46 PM

    You have a unique way with words. Very creative!

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  13. Amanda MooreSeptember 26, 2010 at 6:03 PM

    Lovely I would love to levitate to that place where wishes piggyback on the wings of prayer...wow!

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  14. Diane TSeptember 26, 2010 at 6:24 PM

    What a diplomatic and serene poem! A joy to read!

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  15. DeborahSeptember 26, 2010 at 10:53 PM

    Wow, wonderfully written and I love the way you set out your poem, just wonderful!!

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  16. Carrie Van HornSeptember 27, 2010 at 6:31 AM

    Truly beautifully written! :-)

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  17. Other MarySeptember 27, 2010 at 1:19 PM

    Nice extended blood metaphor.

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  18. AnaSeptember 27, 2010 at 4:17 PM

    My favorite line was "where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer"

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  19. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2010 at 1:55 PM

    "Where wishes piggyback
    On the wings of a prayer"

    One of the most beautiful lines I've every read in my life. Literally.
    Breathtaking

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  20. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2010 at 5:25 PM

    beautiful imagery... love the "cheeks/ etched with traces/ of a pillow stained/ monsoon..."

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  21. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 29, 2010 at 8:16 PM

    Thanks for the beautiful participation at poetry potluck, Happy Wednesday!

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  22. MelOctober 1, 2010 at 7:34 PM

    The undulating rhythm keeps the reader entranced.

    It really is a thing to feel so entwined.

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  23. chelleOctober 7, 2010 at 2:25 PM

    straight dope bruh!

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  24. AnonymousOctober 24, 2010 at 8:39 PM

    Oh! this is such a beautiful poem. I love the vocab, wording and imagery. It all melds together so nicely. well done, Bravo!!

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  25. AnonymousOctober 24, 2010 at 8:44 PM

    Pillow stained monsoon...Nice!

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  26. RiikaInfinityyOctober 25, 2010 at 12:59 AM

    Love the imagery that flow within the poem =D great to be here!^^~

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  27. AnonymousOctober 25, 2010 at 6:16 AM

    wow! love your words..

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  28. BubbaOctober 25, 2010 at 8:20 AM

    I'll bet you could have kept going with the "It feels like..." stanzas - it seemed you had plenty to say, maybe more than you did. Nice piece.

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  29. AnonymousOctober 25, 2010 at 10:38 AM

    Absolutely exquisite poem!

    http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/10/08/room-for-romance-old-love/

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  30. signed...bkmOctober 25, 2010 at 12:07 PM

    beautiful - would love to hear it read - that feeling - you described it so very well...lovely...bkm

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  31. AnonymousOctober 25, 2010 at 6:11 PM

    Very creative. Enjoyed it.

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  32. JamieDedesOctober 25, 2010 at 7:12 PM

    This is a simply wonderful poem with undertones of peace and a sense of eternity. Nice work. Fine contribution to potluck. Thank you.

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  33. Vinay Leo R.October 26, 2010 at 9:22 AM

    creative, filled with lovely imagery and more! I second BKM, would love to hear it read! :D

    My Potluck Is Here.

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