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There's a joke, that people who survive a tornado always come out saying,
"It sounded like a freight train" when a reporter st...
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......oh to be in that place where i've lost my way back to that existence draped with disdain....
ReplyDeletei will never EVER get enough of your pen....mmph
That was like a kiss from a loved one. I needed it.
ReplyDeleteOooh, I love this and really like the way you present your stuff!
ReplyDeleteOh, how beautiful!
ReplyDeletePamela
Beautifully written, and wonderful presentation of your work! =)
ReplyDelete-Weasel
"...where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer..."
ReplyDeleteNice :-)
I, too, especially loved "where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer".......great line. I enjoyed this poem, well done!
ReplyDeleteAll I have to say is..
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(In a good way, of course)
-LJ
Wonderfully written, love your words!=P
ReplyDeleteit feels like morning breeze,
ReplyDeletelove your word play and the images your words evoke.
stunning poem!
This poem gives me a feeling of peacefulness!
ReplyDeleteYou have a unique way with words. Very creative!
ReplyDeleteLovely I would love to levitate to that place where wishes piggyback on the wings of prayer...wow!
ReplyDeleteWhat a diplomatic and serene poem! A joy to read!
ReplyDeleteWow, wonderfully written and I love the way you set out your poem, just wonderful!!
ReplyDeleteTruly beautifully written! :-)
ReplyDeleteNice extended blood metaphor.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line was "where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer"
ReplyDelete"Where wishes piggyback
ReplyDeleteOn the wings of a prayer"
One of the most beautiful lines I've every read in my life. Literally.
Breathtaking
beautiful imagery... love the "cheeks/ etched with traces/ of a pillow stained/ monsoon..."
ReplyDeleteThanks for the beautiful participation at poetry potluck, Happy Wednesday!
ReplyDeleteThe undulating rhythm keeps the reader entranced.
ReplyDeleteIt really is a thing to feel so entwined.
straight dope bruh!
ReplyDeleteOh! this is such a beautiful poem. I love the vocab, wording and imagery. It all melds together so nicely. well done, Bravo!!
ReplyDeletePillow stained monsoon...Nice!
ReplyDeleteLove the imagery that flow within the poem =D great to be here!^^~
ReplyDeletewow! love your words..
ReplyDeleteI'll bet you could have kept going with the "It feels like..." stanzas - it seemed you had plenty to say, maybe more than you did. Nice piece.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely exquisite poem!
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beautiful - would love to hear it read - that feeling - you described it so very well...lovely...bkm
ReplyDeleteVery creative. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a simply wonderful poem with undertones of peace and a sense of eternity. Nice work. Fine contribution to potluck. Thank you.
ReplyDeletecreative, filled with lovely imagery and more! I second BKM, would love to hear it read! :D
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