......oh to be in that place where i've lost my way back to that existence draped with disdain....i will never EVER get enough of your pen....mmph
That was like a kiss from a loved one. I needed it.
Oooh, I love this and really like the way you present your stuff!
Oh, how beautiful!Pamela
Beautifully written, and wonderful presentation of your work! =)-Weasel
"...where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer..."Nice :-)
I, too, especially loved "where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer".......great line. I enjoyed this poem, well done!
All I have to say is..Wow.(In a good way, of course)-LJ
Wonderfully written, love your words!=P
it feels like morning breeze,love your word play and the images your words evoke.stunning poem!
This poem gives me a feeling of peacefulness!
You have a unique way with words. Very creative!
Lovely I would love to levitate to that place where wishes piggyback on the wings of prayer...wow!
What a diplomatic and serene poem! A joy to read!
Wow, wonderfully written and I love the way you set out your poem, just wonderful!!
Truly beautifully written! :-)
Nice extended blood metaphor.
My favorite line was "where wishes piggyback on the wings of a prayer"
"Where wishes piggyback On the wings of a prayer"One of the most beautiful lines I've every read in my life. Literally. Breathtaking
beautiful imagery... love the "cheeks/ etched with traces/ of a pillow stained/ monsoon..."
Thanks for the beautiful participation at poetry potluck, Happy Wednesday!
The undulating rhythm keeps the reader entranced. It really is a thing to feel so entwined.
straight dope bruh!
Oh! this is such a beautiful poem. I love the vocab, wording and imagery. It all melds together so nicely. well done, Bravo!!
Pillow stained monsoon...Nice!
Love the imagery that flow within the poem =D great to be here!^^~
wow! love your words..
I'll bet you could have kept going with the "It feels like..." stanzas - it seemed you had plenty to say, maybe more than you did. Nice piece.
Absolutely exquisite poem!http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/10/08/room-for-romance-old-love/
beautiful - would love to hear it read - that feeling - you described it so very well...lovely...bkm
Very creative. Enjoyed it.
This is a simply wonderful poem with undertones of peace and a sense of eternity. Nice work. Fine contribution to potluck. Thank you.
creative, filled with lovely imagery and more! I second BKM, would love to hear it read! :DMy Potluck Is Here.