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Sunday, June 12, 2011

Upon A Colibri Moon...

This is a collaboration with a fellow poet and friend for life name Journey...


Posted by Dasuntoucha at 9:57 PM
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18 comments:

  1. ReflectionsJune 12, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    a fabulous collaboration... much depth, tenderness yet power bursting from the lines.

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  2. KunlineJune 12, 2011 at 10:45 PM

    WoW!!!! This is beautiful, passionate, and sublime!!! Thank you to both of you.

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  3. JingleJune 13, 2011 at 5:35 AM

    This is so creative.
    Glad to see you in.
    keep your creativity coming.

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  4. Poets UnitedJune 13, 2011 at 7:38 AM

    Nice - such an original piece. Great idea and well executed.

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  5. KavitaJune 13, 2011 at 10:55 PM

    What an aahhmaaazzing collaboration!! Such a unique poem this is!! Really lovely!! It was like reading 3 different poems in one - the red alone, the black alone, and red-with-black in conjunct! TOOO GOOD!!

    Kudos to the both of you on such a fabulous duet!!

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  6. AnonymousJune 14, 2011 at 2:13 AM

    wowww! fantastic thoughts and idea! so creative, love it :)

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  7. AnonymousJune 14, 2011 at 6:01 AM

    This is incredible so many breath-taking phrases!

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  8. Olive TreeJune 14, 2011 at 6:21 AM

    I love the creativity in this project for both of you. Thank you for sharing them. They're deep. Thank you for visiting and commenting on my post too.

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  9. Climb2NowhereJune 14, 2011 at 7:08 AM

    I just read each side 5 times. This is amazing!!!!! I love when artists work together because just like everything else in life with the right partner magic happens. That was so beautiful! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!

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  10. Judith C EvansJune 14, 2011 at 8:06 AM

    Love the way the two poems mirror each other. Such a powerful collaboration of poets' hearts.

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  11. Rachel HoytJune 15, 2011 at 6:09 AM

    What a cool collaborative format! You compliment each other beautifully.

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  12. TashtooJune 16, 2011 at 4:29 AM

    Amazing! I LOVE this!

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  13. Ann GrenierJune 16, 2011 at 7:15 AM

    I love the combined line "Called uncertainty as truth". Such a creative effort, look forward to more. The script you use really enhances the poem with a very personal touch.

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  14. Brian MillerJune 16, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    dude...stellar form....love the call and repeat between the two of you...each could stand alone but together make so much more...

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  15. ClaudiaJune 16, 2011 at 2:56 PM

    so cool - they could both stand alone and yet float seamlessly into one another...great collab...

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  16. LolamouseJune 16, 2011 at 5:38 PM

    What a great idea and so well done! The two poems were like a dance. Each beautiful on its own but even more beautiful together.

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  17. Henry ClemmonsJune 16, 2011 at 7:34 PM

    Lost my comment some how. Anyway, great conversation. Extremely unique and creative.

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  18. Katherine KrigeJune 16, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    That was fantastic. I read it from left to right going down, but am going to go back & re-read. I suspect you could also read each side individually.

    Yes, and again fabulous! As others have said, this is a fabulous collaboration & a delight to read. One of my favourite entries for One Stop this week. Thanks for visiting me, so I could enjoy such a wonderful piece.

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