With this Dante's summer that's been blasting the Nation's Capital, it's good to know that Fall is right around the corner...
fading light
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cigarette butts pile
spill from the lip
of a rusty coffee can
beside milkcrate seats
orange dusk clouds flow
drifting east
then south over New York
moon ri...
11 hours ago
oh this is really beautiful. Did you do the artwork also? We are heading into our Spring, which I'm so happy about, but Autumn is a lovely time of year - the fallen leaves make a wonderful carpet. An inspiring time for photography and art.
ReplyDeleteHey Missy (^_^) this is a piece from a few years ago...it was a haiku challenge for a group where the moderator used the background image as the inspiration...she didn't credit it to the orginal artist so I always left in on that closed board...until now.
ReplyDeleteThis is very beautiful!!! Did you create the artwork also?
ReplyDeleteOkay I see it (your signature)... sorry. But again this is some beautiful artwork. Very peaceful... fall is my favorite season. :-)
ReplyDeleteOh this is beautiful...I would so frame this...
ReplyDeleteFabulous, enlightening ... well done.
ReplyDeleteHaiku is one of my favorite poetic forms and you just wrote a phenomenal Haiku!
ReplyDeleteI'm going to put you on my blogroll...I mean we are poets united now ; )
You have been tagged!
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and there is an award for you as well!!
I love the alchemy image -poem really fits both the background image and my own feelings about fall.
ReplyDeletewell said :D
ReplyDeletevery beautiful work..
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have presented this poem. Very effective. Front row seats are free - wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, the words and the way it is presented, I loved it. :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is just perfect ... I love it!
ReplyDeleteA perfect presentation of this poem! So refreshing and energizing!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love it!
ReplyDeleteYou've just about said it perfectly! Fall is a spectacular show that I sit and watch with delight, (from my front roos seats)...:)
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful piece of work!
ReplyDeleteI just love the last line....it is perfectly wonderful! :-)
ReplyDeleteAmazing love both the words and image, they fit in so nicely with each other!=P
ReplyDeleteI love this; It so suits the mood of the season!
ReplyDelete"front row seats are free" - yes! so much beauty, ours to be had just for showing up. Thank you...
ReplyDeletefront row seats are free...
ReplyDeletelove your philosophy.