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Saturday, August 28, 2010

Broken People




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Posted by Dasuntoucha at 5:05 PM
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18 comments:

  1. MelAugust 28, 2010 at 9:00 PM

    Sadly, modern living breaks us all beyond repair. Lovely presentation...

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  2. KunlineAugust 28, 2010 at 10:48 PM

    I am loving this one!Sad but so real...storms of life...we must have faith in healing beyond unhealthy guilt. Life is beautiful regardless. Thank you, Ciao.

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  3. ClaudiaAugust 29, 2010 at 12:13 AM

    broken people - yeah - wonder if there are many unbroken people left in todays world…you beautifully capture the brokenness, the hope of finding someone but also the truth that no other human can make us whole again - but maybe help a bit with love, good advice and patience

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  4. Herb AlyètteAugust 29, 2010 at 9:28 AM

    I only the broken people could fix each other.

    And welcome to Poets United

    Herb Alyette.

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  5. AnonymousAugust 29, 2010 at 11:07 AM

    This is such a powerful and heartbreaking poem..I suspect many of us have been damaged enough in the past, (or present), to identify with this!

    I like how you've printed this out...it this something you've submitted to Robb's new poetry card project? I see the one you posted previous to this is the same..in any case, they're great.

    Thanks for stopping by my place...
    Lynette

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  6. short poemsAugust 30, 2010 at 8:53 AM

    Really powerful poem, love it very much!

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  7. ClimbtoNowhereAugust 30, 2010 at 1:00 PM

    Beautiful poem and love the presentation. Broken people....ahhhh...we all know them. Really lovely piece.

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  8. DasuntouchaAugust 30, 2010 at 6:17 PM

    As a former broken person I appreciate the time you guys took to stop by and check this post out...ONE:: (^_^)

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  9. PahadiAugust 31, 2010 at 3:15 AM

    Simply beautiful. how few words can try to express so overwhelming emotions.!!

    http://triflemusings.blogspot.com/

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  10. AnonymousAugust 31, 2010 at 8:39 AM

    Hey! I am a new member at poets united and guess what? I'm in a group with you! So Lets start talkin'

    Very nice to meet you

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  11. EdenSeptember 5, 2010 at 1:40 AM

    Poetry is not my field but this is touching. Great poem. Very poignant.

    Everyone has been broken, but the broken ones this poem refers to are those who are reliant on others or a situation for their happiness. I have a strong belief that everyone take full responsibility for their own. That is not to mean you shouldn't use those around you, but you should not be fully reliant upon them. We are our own person.

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  12. brownsugatouSeptember 6, 2010 at 9:46 AM

    So many truths here.. great poem!

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  13. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2010 at 9:48 PM

    Again very beautiful presentation..
    Nicely put across, very nicely treated..
    Different..

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  14. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2010 at 7:21 PM

    Thanks for your wonderful comments on my blog!! Look at you, I am so lucky to have come across this site, appreciate your attempt at saving one "broken" person at a time!!

    Good job,
    Rachana.

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  15. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2010 at 6:58 AM

    ha! what advice - very real... i dig, for sure.

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  16. SusannahSeptember 12, 2010 at 1:40 PM

    Love it! Love it! Love it!

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  17. gautami tripathySeptember 14, 2010 at 5:39 AM

    I loved this..


    a child's play

    And do get aboard the Poetry Train every Monday mornings and thereafter!

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  18. Flying MonkeySeptember 15, 2010 at 2:00 PM

    Nice one :-)

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