Well written poem! The life of a single mother is not easy.
Wow, your poem about single motherhood is both inspiring and well crafted. I love this explanation of how life conspires to sap you of your energy when you have that "every thing" job. I bet you do well.
Wonderfully written piece! Loved how you crafted it all together! =)-Weasel
An emotional story. Blissfully written.
It seems a single motheris always saddled with the plural tasksHaving been there, I identify with this line the most. And yet, it was worth it all...Heaven is realizingshe was given the opportunity.So so true.
An emotional, pivotal poem...never ending, loved it~ You told the honesty of the loneliness and the burden, of no help.
This poem so wonderfully weaves together the complex net of exhaustion, frustration and absolute joy that holds us captive as busy mothers. Your last few lines say it all...however difficult the job, we are indeed grateful for the opportunity to be doing it. The painting you have used to illustrate this piece is stunning...
What a lovely piece of writing.
It is a difficult and poignant life you describe in both words and the image’s lines. Very touching.
Sun. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Your word choice is perfection. As always...thoroughly enjoyed.
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Your blog is wonderful..Keep writing, I deff can see myself actually thinking.. and learning from theses..♥keep writing, I'll keep reading ..xox Hailey
i don't know what i like most about this - the poem itself, the image used to represent it, the flow, the message,...god, there are so many elements to be considered...and i adore the combination!...Lilly
cool capture of emotional ups and downs...
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