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Saturday, September 18, 2010

Proclivity's Paradise




Painting by Susilowati
Words by dasuntoucha
Posted by Dasuntoucha at 1:54 PM
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14 comments:

  1. MarySeptember 18, 2010 at 3:10 PM

    Well written poem! The life of a single mother is not easy.

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  2. Judy RoneySeptember 18, 2010 at 3:52 PM

    Wow, your poem about single motherhood is both inspiring and well crafted. I love this explanation of how life conspires to sap you of your energy when you have that "every thing" job. I bet you do well.

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  3. WeaselSeptember 18, 2010 at 4:05 PM

    Wonderfully written piece! Loved how you crafted it all together! =)

    -Weasel

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  4. Diane TSeptember 18, 2010 at 6:52 PM

    An emotional story. Blissfully written.

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  5. ninotazizSeptember 18, 2010 at 7:15 PM

    It seems a single mother
    is always saddled with the plural tasks

    Having been there, I identify with this line the most. And yet, it was worth it all...

    Heaven is realizing
    she was given the opportunity.

    So so true.

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  6. EllaSeptember 18, 2010 at 9:31 PM

    An emotional, pivotal poem...never ending, loved it~ You told the honesty of the loneliness and the burden, of no help.

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2010 at 11:25 PM

    This poem so wonderfully weaves together the complex net of exhaustion, frustration and absolute joy that holds us captive as busy mothers. Your last few lines say it all...however difficult the job, we are indeed grateful for the opportunity to be doing it. The painting you have used to illustrate this piece is stunning...

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  8. Paul Andrew RussellSeptember 19, 2010 at 12:03 PM

    What a lovely piece of writing.

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  9. MelSeptember 20, 2010 at 4:07 AM

    It is a difficult and poignant life you describe in both words and the image’s lines. Very touching.

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2010 at 6:52 AM

    Sun. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
    Your word choice is perfection.
    As always...thoroughly enjoyed.

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  11. Some kind of courage.September 30, 2010 at 11:02 PM

    Your blog is wonderful..
    Keep writing, I deff can see myself actually thinking.. and learning from theses..♥
    keep writing, I'll keep reading ..
    xox Hailey

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  12. AnonymousOctober 8, 2010 at 6:10 PM

    i don't know what i like most about this - the poem itself, the image used to represent it, the flow, the message,...god, there are so many elements to be considered...and i adore the combination!...
    Lilly

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  13. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 9, 2010 at 12:04 PM

    cool capture of emotional ups and downs...

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  14. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 9, 2010 at 12:04 PM

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/awards-from-the-blogging-universe/two-lovely-award-4-u/

    two awards for you,
    have a smiling day!

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