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Sunday, October 10, 2010

Volition


This post is a response to Jingle's Poetry POTLUCK...the theme is Beaches and Mountains...



Poets United Poetry Pantry
Posted by Dasuntoucha at 7:16 PM
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17 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 10, 2010 at 8:03 PM

    adventurous beach poem.
    when it is portrayed in poetry, it becomes magical and fun!

    love your creativity.
    those footprints are way too cool for the piece.

    thanks for sharing!

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  2. TeresaOctober 10, 2010 at 8:11 PM

    Tons of powerful, emotionally laden words here!

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  3. Shashidhar SharmaOctober 10, 2010 at 9:58 PM

    So powerful and good.. I enjoyed it thanks...I have always loved the way you present your poetry too.. this one is nicely done.. goes with th verse...thanks for sharing...

    जय दुर्गा जी, जय काली माँ
    Jai Durga ji, Jai Kali Ma
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  4. Abigail Pearl PopeOctober 11, 2010 at 7:50 AM

    I love your description of pessimism as a "fog of invisibility." What made you think of that?

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  5. Emmanuel IbokOctober 11, 2010 at 1:53 PM

    Wonderful...well penned.
    cheers!

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  6. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 11, 2010 at 5:53 PM

    The poem is great and I really like the handwritten effect and the footsteps. Pretty cool!I love "imprints of their own choosing".

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  7. RiikaInfinityyOctober 11, 2010 at 6:05 PM

    I can see myself walking into the picture, great words!=P

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  8. TALONOctober 11, 2010 at 6:31 PM

    There is such a gorgeous thread of hope in this poem. I loved the imagery of the slipping down dreams. Lovely!

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  9. Eileen T O'Neill .....October 11, 2010 at 6:54 PM

    dasuntoucha,
    A wonderful piece of writing and images.

    Best wishes, Eileen

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  10. Lu AnnOctober 11, 2010 at 7:26 PM

    Wow! I love your blog´s concept.Thanks a lot for commenting in mine!
    Wow... you know? I think nothing can really asphyxiate happiness... maybe we never really know what happiness is, that´s why we tend to lose it.

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  11. OliviaOctober 12, 2010 at 1:42 AM

    What a strong creativity expressed in image and poem.. beautiful weaving of words.. Beautifully done.. Happy Potluck.. xoxox

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  12. Climb2NowhereOctober 12, 2010 at 7:53 PM

    I just love your poetry. This has such a positive message. It's so hopeful. Beautiful as always!

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  13. JamieDedesOctober 13, 2010 at 8:03 PM

    This is quite wonderful as is the fact that folks from the favelas - where ever they may be and under whatever name they - do have suppressed sprit, but many still manage to make footprints in the sand. Nicely done.

    Belatedly here from potluck, by the way.

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  14. AnonymousOctober 15, 2010 at 1:00 AM

    Very creative and your poem really shines.

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  15. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 16, 2010 at 5:47 PM

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/happy-birthday-wishes-to-talon/

    help visit Talon to wish her a happy birthday today,
    Thanks!
    hope you well..

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  16. AnonymousOctober 18, 2010 at 1:56 PM

    This is really unique. The ideas flow quite well. Good write.

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  17. AnonymousOctober 28, 2010 at 12:25 PM

    How many times has this happened to me?? One minute happiness, the next minute a vague worry that fills my heart! Once again, great randomness in your thoughts which makes for some delightful reads!!
    Rachana.

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