I love this and the last bit is awesome!Pamela
Brilliant concept! I love how you do that. :-)
this is amazing flashback poem.wow,u impress me!
I love this. The picture you laid the poem out on is perfect. It's so sad. What a talent!
What a delightfully funny look at crime, life and death from a completely different aspect.
Unique presentation! Loved it!
Oh wow, I LOVE this. The format is great but I actually just really love the poem itself. You seriously outdid yourself this time :) Fantastic job
If floors could talk...isn't something you hear every day. :D
As always I appreciate the time you fellow poets take out to stop by my little corner of the net (^_^)...ONE::
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wow quite a unique perspective, a new twist to 'if these walls could talk' :) the format is perfect for the scenario even if it is a little hard to read at the top. cool.
Very poignant and close to raw emotions. I specially liked the way you have used the picture and the words on the floor to highlight the story... in graphic way.. thanksॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
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The whole story in a poem ... a twist on the fly on the wall thing ... Excellent. Raw. Well done... A fine contribution to Poets Rally. Thank you.Poem on ...
Wow, that was great. I love the picture along with the poem. Very creative.
So creative - you are really talented.
This was very creative and of coarse you alway write it out amazingly!!!