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Sunday, October 3, 2010

Scrub & Wax

This piece was inspired by #235 Flashback from the Sunday Scribblings Blogspot...

...which I am also sharing at:
Poets United Poetry Pantry
The image from this post can be found here.
Words by dasuntoucha © 2010
Posted by Dasuntoucha at 3:15 PM
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18 comments:

  1. I love this and the last bit is awesome!
    Pamela

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  2. Brilliant concept! I love how you do that. :-)

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  3. this is amazing flashback poem.
    wow,
    u impress me!

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  4. I love this. The picture you laid the poem out on is perfect. It's so sad. What a talent!

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  5. What a delightfully funny look at crime, life and death from a completely different aspect.

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  7. Unique presentation! Loved it!

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  8. Oh wow, I LOVE this. The format is great but I actually just really love the poem itself. You seriously outdid yourself this time :) Fantastic job

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  9. If floors could talk...
    isn't something you hear every day. :D

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  10. As always I appreciate the time you fellow poets take out to stop by my little corner of the net (^_^)...ONE::

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  11. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/06/thursday-poets-rally-week-30/

    welcome to Rally week 30,
    a most 3 poems are accepted within 7 days…
    Happy Thursday!

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  12. wow quite a unique perspective, a new twist to 'if these walls could talk' :) the format is perfect for the scenario even if it is a little hard to read at the top. cool.

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  13. Very poignant and close to raw emotions. I specially liked the way you have used the picture and the words on the floor to highlight the story... in graphic way.. thanks

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  14. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/08/the-perfect-poet-award-4-poets-rally-week-30/

    I am honoring you an award,
    thanks for the outstanding contribution!

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  15. The whole story in a poem ... a twist on the fly on the wall thing ... Excellent. Raw. Well done... A fine contribution to Poets Rally. Thank you.

    Poem on ...

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  16. Wow, that was great. I love the picture along with the poem. Very creative.

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  17. So creative - you are really talented.

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  18. This was very creative and of coarse you alway write it out amazingly!!!

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