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Monday, March 7, 2011

Writeous


Posted by Dasuntoucha at 8:59 PM
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23 comments:

  1. KavitaMarch 7, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    Oh wooowww!! What a fiiiiine ode to all poetesses and women writers!! :) Umm.. thank you for this tribute and for this fantabulous share at poetry potluck!!
    I sooo enjoy your wordplay, D... you stun me with it every single time!! Awesome!!

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  2. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 1:18 AM

    you made me scrmble for my dictionary haha das my friend!

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  3. AnonymousMarch 8, 2011 at 3:23 AM

    Truly enjoyed the imagery- vivid my fellow write, is this :)

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 8, 2011 at 5:43 AM

    smooth flow.
    enjoyed it very much, superb art/poetry.

    A++

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  5. OliviaMarch 8, 2011 at 7:45 AM

    Very well said.. :)
    I couldn't help but smile towards the end!

    I loved how you build it up around n then brought it up to say you are addicted :D

    I feel much honored being a lady and a writer- if I may..

    Love xox

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  6. KunlineMarch 8, 2011 at 9:41 AM

    olalalala smooth as always. I love the flow!!

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  7. Brian MillerMarch 8, 2011 at 9:51 AM

    wow...this has wicked flow and yes i too have mine i feast on nightly...

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  8. Climb2NowhereMarch 8, 2011 at 3:39 PM

    That is HOT! I love it! You're so talented and I love your work. Keep it coming!

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  9. ReflectionsMarch 8, 2011 at 8:38 PM

    Wonderful write... poetry.. other's thoughts can be very addictive as in the narcotic you speak of in the end. Well done.

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  10. CarlMarch 8, 2011 at 8:39 PM

    This is a great write! Very clever, the flow is good and it is easy to identify as I reached the end.

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  11. UnknownMarch 8, 2011 at 9:16 PM

    wat more can be said?the meter and flow are incredible.a verbal narcotic i must say.

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  12. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 5:09 AM

    WOW! Words Of Wonder! :)

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  13. Brother OllieMarch 9, 2011 at 5:42 AM

    Passion flows under this poem. Nice One Shot!

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  14. ClaudiaMarch 9, 2011 at 8:31 AM

    oh wow - wonder if this is about a specific writer - every writer does wish to stir this kind of emotion in someone...great poem!

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  15. dustusMarch 9, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    What I like best about this piece is that in describing the literary qualities of your muse, your poem exemplifies said qualities as a counterpart to her inspiration.

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  16. signed...bkmMarch 9, 2011 at 8:40 AM

    very nice...love is addictive and what a beautiful thing to be addicted too...bkm

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  17. UnknownMarch 9, 2011 at 8:56 AM

    Wow, this is lovely, and you perfectly describe the seduction of words and their power :)

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  18. TashtooMarch 9, 2011 at 10:56 AM

    You really do have quite the way with words. Perfection dances, painting the sky of your mind (really took to that line) Hope your veins can handle the rush! Plus, it sounds AWESOME read outloud, and isn't that the true test :) glad to have found you!

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  19. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 12:19 PM

    This is amazing. I feel like a peeping tom, witnessing an incredibly passionate liaison. I can tell you are in love with words. Yeah!

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  20. AnonymousMarch 13, 2011 at 7:02 PM

    Greetings!

    Thanks for the lovely contribution to potluck on week 25,

    week 26 is open NOW, we treasury your poetry

    and welcome you in in your personal convenience…old poems are welcome!

    xoxox

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  21. Hayden AndrewsMarch 19, 2011 at 6:04 AM

    Just another comment on the nice flow of words ;)

    The Poetry Bin

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  22. Climb2NowhereMarch 22, 2011 at 6:27 PM

    Always beautiful and very melodic. Also romantic. I loved it as always!

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  23. MarianJune 4, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    ravenous rhetoric rush! yum.

    i stopped by to say: As Poets United reaches its first anniversary this coming week we want to thank you for your support. Over the past year we have grown to 250 members plus and are steadily growing. Poets United is proud to have you as one of our members and look forward to another successful year. Your imagination, creativity and willingness to share with us is what makes our community such a wonderful place. Thank you for beautiful poetry and thank you for being a part of Poets United.

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