Yeah what you said... Can't even ..YaWWWNN.. now.. smiles.
stunning imageries :) made me look out into the night sky and wonder about your words too.My Potluck Post. It's Random This Time.
this is just beautiful!!!http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/16/hola-lola-a-next-story/
This is beautiful.Glad to see you back.A++
Beautiful.. simply beautiful..!!
great wordplay my friend.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/
your use of vocab really slams this home as a great peice!wonderful in my eyes!thank you!
Powerful, the lines:biopsy my illusions with a dull knifeWow!
apryl picked the same lines...pow that is a visual...and search for an obsidian mesiah among...tight dude...spin those words...
"with a dull knife forged from rusty stars"brilliant line! i love this!
i like the picture of a mind swimming through midnight sky..and yes - the same lines as apryl and brian - tight...
eye can feel the cosmos biopsy my illusions? WOW. Great on multiple levels. Keep on poeting!
Now, this is what I'm talking! GOOD poetry that has rusty knives from the stars and such. Yes!!
Returning again from One Shot, and still did enjoy this wonderful imagery. It's afternoon now, so made me impatient for night :)My Post Is Here
Not only do I love the words, but also the presentation. You always create the right mood to understand your words. Beautiful poem and glad you're back.