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Sunday, April 17, 2011

Insomneopia


© 2011 dasuntoucha
One Shot Wednesday

15 comments:

  1. Yeah what you said... Can't even ..YaWWWNN.. now.. smiles.

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  2. stunning imageries :) made me look out into the night sky and wonder about your words too.

    My Potluck Post. It's Random This Time.

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  3. this is just beautiful!!!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/16/hola-lola-a-next-story/

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  4. This is beautiful.
    Glad to see you back.


    A++

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  5. Beautiful.. simply beautiful..!!

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  6. great wordplay my friend.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  7. your use of vocab really slams this home as a great peice!
    wonderful in my eyes!
    thank you!

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  8. Powerful, the lines:
    biopsy my illusions with a dull knife

    Wow!

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  9. apryl picked the same lines...pow that is a visual...and search for an obsidian mesiah among...tight dude...spin those words...

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  10. "with a dull knife
    forged from
    rusty stars"

    brilliant line! i love this!

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  11. i like the picture of a mind swimming through midnight sky..and yes - the same lines as apryl and brian - tight...

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  12. eye can feel the cosmos biopsy my illusions? WOW. Great on multiple levels. Keep on poeting!

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  13. Now, this is what I'm talking! GOOD poetry that has rusty knives from the stars and such. Yes!!

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  14. Returning again from One Shot, and still did enjoy this wonderful imagery. It's afternoon now, so made me impatient for night :)

    My Post Is Here

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  15. Not only do I love the words, but also the presentation. You always create the right mood to understand your words. Beautiful poem and glad you're back.

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