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Sunday, April 17, 2011

Insomneopia


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One Shot Wednesday
Posted by Dasuntoucha at 9:40 PM
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15 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 18, 2011 at 12:04 AM

    Yeah what you said... Can't even ..YaWWWNN.. now.. smiles.

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  2. Vinay Leo R.April 18, 2011 at 8:31 AM

    stunning imageries :) made me look out into the night sky and wonder about your words too.

    My Potluck Post. It's Random This Time.

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  3. AnonymousApril 18, 2011 at 8:59 AM

    this is just beautiful!!!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/16/hola-lola-a-next-story/

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallApril 18, 2011 at 10:47 AM

    This is beautiful.
    Glad to see you back.


    A++

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  5. AnonymousApril 18, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    Beautiful.. simply beautiful..!!

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  6. AnonymousApril 19, 2011 at 12:18 AM

    great wordplay my friend.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  7. AnonymousApril 19, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    your use of vocab really slams this home as a great peice!
    wonderful in my eyes!
    thank you!

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  8. Apryl GonzalesApril 20, 2011 at 8:19 PM

    Powerful, the lines:
    biopsy my illusions with a dull knife

    Wow!

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  9. Brian MillerApril 21, 2011 at 5:41 AM

    apryl picked the same lines...pow that is a visual...and search for an obsidian mesiah among...tight dude...spin those words...

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  10. AnonymousApril 21, 2011 at 8:11 AM

    "with a dull knife
    forged from
    rusty stars"

    brilliant line! i love this!

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  11. ClaudiaApril 21, 2011 at 12:47 PM

    i like the picture of a mind swimming through midnight sky..and yes - the same lines as apryl and brian - tight...

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  12. Danielle FilasApril 21, 2011 at 4:21 PM

    eye can feel the cosmos biopsy my illusions? WOW. Great on multiple levels. Keep on poeting!

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  13. Jannie FunsterApril 21, 2011 at 6:44 PM

    Now, this is what I'm talking! GOOD poetry that has rusty knives from the stars and such. Yes!!

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  14. Vinay Leo R.April 22, 2011 at 2:45 AM

    Returning again from One Shot, and still did enjoy this wonderful imagery. It's afternoon now, so made me impatient for night :)

    My Post Is Here

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  15. Climb2NowhereMay 22, 2011 at 5:31 PM

    Not only do I love the words, but also the presentation. You always create the right mood to understand your words. Beautiful poem and glad you're back.

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